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Arrhythmia

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Aug 05, 2021

To:Erii

Thanks for the feedback, I've been improving on that as the chapters progress!

The Life of Death

Chapter:1

Aug 05, 2021

To:mikasajean

Thanks! I hope I can keep the chapters at the same level of quality as the story continues!

The Life of Death

Chapter:8

Aug 04, 2021

To:mikasajean

Yep! Aoki is meant to seriously make your skin crawl haha

The Life of Death

Chapter:11

Aug 04, 2021

To:cmoneyjr

She very much is

The Life of Death

Chapter:2

Aug 04, 2021

You had a great deal of descriptions when introducing the Clickers and I liked that a lot. It really gave me a good image of them. I'll keep up with this one as I am curious to see what direction this story takes.

By the Shores of Time

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2021

Your character’s voice is awesome! I really enjoy it and it flows so smoothly. I’ll make sure to keep reading!

Densetsu Kenshi: Beginnings

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2021

To:cmoneyjr

Thank you very much! I'll make sure to swing over and give yours a read as well!

The Life of Death

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2021

To:Joe Gold

I've already started reading it and am going to get back to reading more soon. I've enjoyed it so far!

The Life of Death

Chapter:1

Aug 01, 2021

You got airships, pirates by the sound of it so far and a good set up so far. You have good skills with constructing an image from your writing so I will definitely keep reading!

PENUMBRA

Chapter:0

Jul 31, 2021

The world building you've done so far is interesting. You have set up a pretty unique world that could go in a lot of different directions and even have spin offs. So far I'm liking it so I'll stick with it!

Flight of The Blackbird

Chapter:2

Jul 31, 2021

To:znf

Thank you for so much feed back it really helps! Logan's role is pretty big within the story so his personality will most surely smooth out the further I get in it. As for Ava I was trying to show how she is strong willed and headstrong, but still limited by her own shortcomings in a world filled with foes much deadlier than her, hence why she had a short breakdown in chapter 6. I'll keep working on having her character stand out on its own from just following plot points so thank you for bringing that up.

The Life of Death

Chapter:9

Jul 30, 2021

I really hope this gets continued at some point. There's some good world-building here.

Song Of The Lost Birds

Chapter:2

Jul 28, 2021

To:mikasajean

Glad you like Logan. He's my favorite character with the novel too. Big things to come involving him so stayed tuned!

The Life of Death

Chapter:7

Jul 26, 2021

Thank you for the input! I've been working on improving the word choice has the story progresses. Glad you enjoyed the first chapter and world so far!

The Life of Death

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2021

Ch.5 edit on July 25th. Hopefully that will clear up any confusion in this chapter!

The Life of Death

Chapter:5

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