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Apr 23, 2025

To:Han Quixote

that really does sound scary bro. 7k words seems like a lot tho. unless ur gnna squeeze in a whole new arc or something (that might be crazy)

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:47

Apr 23, 2025

To:Han Quixote

i think itll be alright man. i dont know what u have planned but theresno way this chapter can really negatively influence the work that much. itd just be something that u might change up later on while rereading. nothing crazy

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:47

Apr 23, 2025

To:Han Quixote

nah it does serve its purpose, i sort of have that feeling like thats pretty much it for them

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:47

Apr 23, 2025

To:Han Quixote

yeah thats cool. they all served a purpose but its proly just down to authors preference. i think i wouldve handled this differently

but thats the beauty of uniqueness! i wouldnt have liked ur novel in the first place if it didnt bring new interesting ideas to the table. hoping for a strong ending and ik u probably will deliver

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:47

Apr 23, 2025

is he atlas because hes the strongest or is he the strongest because hes atlas

ngl bro i get that its the theme but it feels like there have been like 10 chapters now of just farewells and "i guess its time to leave"
theyre not bad but it gets redundant at some point

its just one chapter tho its fine. its read in like 3 mins anyway

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:47

Apr 23, 2025

To:Han Quixote

if things go downhill just know its your fault..

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:12

Apr 23, 2025

To:Han Quixote

katerina ("the greatest") has me dying bruh why her 😭

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:12

Apr 23, 2025

To:Han Quixote

LMAO your imagination runs wild sometimes bro 😭

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:12

Apr 23, 2025

To:Han Quixote

famous last words before i turn this into a battle shonen

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:12

Apr 23, 2025

To:Han Quixote

youre right on everything actually

tbh i realized it was quick but thats just cuz i didnt wanna waste any more time on it. theres quite a bit of content left bro the deadline has me scared

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:12

Apr 23, 2025

To:Han Quixote

ITS ACTUALLY REALISTIC? I mean Thats what I was going for but wow if u say it it must be true

To be honest, I wanted to make this chapter all grand and heartfelt, but it just didn’t seem right. I realized that a bittersweet calmness was the best route to go. And honestly I like how it turned out. Thanks for your comments

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:12

Apr 23, 2025

trickiest dialogue ive ever had to write
lets see how this goes

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:12

Apr 22, 2025

To:Han Quixote

yeah yeah....

keep that pararaph too whatever it is

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:46

Apr 22, 2025

To:Han Quixote

i just look for anything to help me procrastinate

the last lines are still hype tho and im all for it

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:46

Apr 22, 2025

yeah this last arc might just be something else. such a stark change from last chapter but this is just as good

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:46

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