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Jul 29, 2021

To:Bentknee

Hey! Thanks so much for checking my novel out! Relatability is what I was going for, but in full on anime style💯 Hope you enjoy the chapters to come!

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Jul 29, 2021

To:Bubbles

Heya.

Thanks so much for giving my novel a read and for the brutally honest feedback. I completely agree with your sentiment regarding the "weak" MC - I guess I intended to develop him over the course of the series but I understand that there might not have been enough information about him to be able to relate. In fact, in light of your comment, I updated the prologue to better reflect the plans I have for him as a character, and as someone you can get behind.

As for the part about the lack of stakes, you might have been a little hasty there given that it was just the prologue, haha. There is a lot to come in that regard in future chapters and at this point, I agree with you that it is not necessarily enough of a "drive" to push Makoto forward as will be seen.

Also wanted to ask - when you read the synopsis, were your expectations about the story more in the realm of a serious Shounen with good character development or a parody/comedy?

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Jul 28, 2021

Took a look from an interesting synopsis. Lot's of exposition, dialogue, and lore-dump, but in a good way. Keep up the good work!

Oddment

Chapter:1

Jul 28, 2021

To:mtsuu

Haha we shall see! Thanks for the continued support mtsuu!

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Chapter:3

Jul 28, 2021

Interesting start, excited to see where this goes!

The Hero's Shadow

Chapter:1

Jul 27, 2021

To:Kharla

Thanks for dropping by, and for the support!

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Chapter:1

Jul 27, 2021

Synopsis pulled me in. Despite being short, the prologue sets a good tone for the novel 😭, felt emotional reading it. Keep up the good work!

Relive

Chapter:0

Jul 27, 2021

Wow that cover art 😍, and also what a bloody first chapter 😂. Well written, felt like I was reading an epic fantasy novel. Excited for what’s to come!

A Storm of Prophecy

Chapter:1

Jul 27, 2021

Something about this pulls me in. I like how the characters backstories are weaved in between the dialogue. Excited to see where this goes!

I Like You, I Just Don't Know it Yet.

Chapter:1

Jul 27, 2021

Nice chapter name lmao, interested by the premise. Keep it up!

One Last Chance

Chapter:0

Jul 26, 2021

To:デビッド

Thanks for checking it out, welcome aboard!

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Jul 26, 2021

To:Deleted User

Hi KawanoSensei! Thanks for the thoughts! Don't worry, there are ways to keep this kind of story going 😤 . Hope the next couple chapters flesh out more of the story, and your feedback is very much welcome then! Welcome aboard!

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Chapter:0

Jul 22, 2021

To:mtsuu

Thanks for the support mtsuu! Glad you like the characters, a decent amount of thought went into making each of them haha. Will continue the grind 😤😤

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Chapter:1

Jul 22, 2021

To:todorokichan

haha also glad you enjoyed the more dialogue filled chapter, will keep your advice in mind for next time!

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Jul 22, 2021

To:todorokichan

these boys be built different 😂

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