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Jul 18, 2022
To:tanktrilby
Thanks for giving this a read, glad things read well. Hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters!
Jul 17, 2022
Really like this start. Good introduction of the world, her situation, and a hook at the end of the chapter. Looking forward to reading more of this. Keep it up! (ps check my entry if you get a chance!)
To:snek
welcome aboard!
Jul 16, 2022
To:Deleted User
the wingman squad is very insistent on Uyeno ๐
Jul 14, 2022
Some serious stuff happening in the outside world ๐ญ crazy that people can go full virtual that interaction between him and his mom is something I know all too well ๐
That rush to school is something I relate to as having done lol ๐ excited to see where this goes, keep it up! (ps check out my entry if you have a chance!)
Haha loved the energy from this chapter. Some of the writing could be polished a bit more, but I assume you're not a native english speaker? Either way keep it up!
Jul 12, 2022
Really interesting concept, letโs see where this goesโฆ
"... since his fluke victory last year" ๐ Man this was such a fun read. Has this polish yet simplicity to it, I never once was bored throughout the chapter. Who's this Pluton person ๐ค? You've got another reader! Excited to read more. (ps check out my entry if you get a chance!)
Rip the father ๐ญ This has a very unique premise compared to the rest of the stuff on this site interested to see how this goes! have a feeling this'll be a nice wholesome read ๐
To:Arashi Sensei
(ps if you get a chance checkout my entry!)
Solid start. There is so much potential that the world building alone is enough to hook me. Great setup with the factions and places for the future chapters. Gives me akame ga kill vibes. Excited to see where this goes, I've added this to my library. Keep it up!
Jul 11, 2022
not gonna lie if a girl falsely accused me of stalking I'd have no idea how to respond ๐ really interesting hook, excited to see how this progresses keep it up! (ps check out my entry if you get a chance!)
Love the dynamic so far between the headstrong Haruhi and mc Also like that we're jumping into our first mystery already, sometimes stories like these have a tendency to drag the intro/worldbuilding further than needed Excited to see how the mystery resolves!
Interested to see where Katie goes, and the world building is great these setup chapters are interesting, but it may help if the main plot were to kick in sooner rather than later just some thoughts for now, keep up the good work!
