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Aug 22, 2021
Nice story, even though this chapter is a bit weaker than the others, but it's alright. You can focus on a bit more details for the storyline and try in every chapter to have a challenge for the character. That would be very interesting and this technique creates tension to the reader. But keep the hard work because you are good at this!
The point that I didn't understand so many things I was expected made me want to read the next chapters! Great job!
What a prologue! You got my attention, I can't wait to read your next chapters, keep going!
Aug 21, 2021
To:RexxDrink
Thank you so much! I will bring more chapters soon! And of course I will read your novel!
To:Deleted User
I am so glad you like it! And of course I will check your novel! Thank you!
Aug 20, 2021
To:Shnux
I didn't watch Promised Neverland, but now I'll watch it for sure! Also the cover I made was created by Edit.org
Aug 05, 2021
I really like how you described everything. Your main character has a special voice and humor, I really laughed! 😁