Sep 22, 2021
😮 That cliffhanger at the end! I just finished reading through your chapters and want to say that your pacing and writing are excellent. Everything was well described from Konoko's introduction to the cliffhanger at the end (I still want to know what's happening from that ending!! haha)
Anyways, I loved the story. It has great potential, and it was truly enjoyable (I mean it). Also, I found it incredible that Konoko was a character you've clung to since the past and wanted to make the character a reality through your novel!
Great job writing and I look forward to reading more once the contest period is over! 😁