Sep 13, 2021
To:N. D. Skordilis
Thanks so much for reading and for your honest feedback! I tried to make the numbered system in my story completely original, but I can see how you made the connection with some numbered systems of other stories. Also, I really had a vision in mind when writing this chapter in terms of violence (it was actually much more violent before, but my friends suggested that I tone it down slightly ^^). Maybe it's still a little too violently vivid? Plus, I will definitely give your novel a read later today! Thank you once more for giving my novel a chance!