IceDonut

IceDonut

25 | him/his | European

Writing since 2016 to find the fine line between the bittersweet beauty of sorrow and the feeling of deep human connection, creating worlds that provide shelter from reality, but also embrace its way of being.
I occasionally write comments/critiques that could be short stories on their own, so sorry for all the flooded comment sections ๐Ÿ˜…
Read into my current novel "Celluloid", if you are interested!

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    Jul 15, 2023

    Okay, that is very interesting โ€ฆ ๐Ÿค”
    But if we are honest, we donโ€™t receive much concrete information about Claire as well. I mean yes, she might have explained what some types of souls are meant to become, and that she somehow might be a fainted star with tendencies to becoming a world breaker (or at least she implies that!!). But we still donโ€™t know how she obtained her immeasurable power. We still donโ€™t know if she actually means herself as the fainted star becoming a world breaker (she did not explicitly state that fainted stars donโ€™t have a star at all - maybe one not shining as brightly?)
    It might as well be possible that Jun is the fainted star and Toren was meant to become the world champion. Only through meddling with him so early on, Jun disrupted the order and became a world breaker himself. I remember how Claire asked Jun if he had given Toren money and how she facepalmed herself, when he said he did. Maybe without money Toren would have set out to become stronger (after all he is quite strong already) and turn into the world champion to defeat the demon lord. His goal was to show up at Miaโ€™s house on a stallion and with servants. Through becoming the hero who defeated the demon lot he definitely would have had such an epic return. Maybe through giving Toren money Jun disrupted the order and had become the world breaker himself now. Maybe Claire is not included inside all these descriptions, but an entity outside of all the ones she mentioned.
    So while she told us a lot about stars and world people, she only implied who which one might be. She said many things without saying a lot โ€ฆ
    She did not explain why she had no star herself and it might as well be possible, that they are assigned much differently than we were meant to think right now ๐Ÿค”

    But maybe Iโ€™m tripping over my own overthinking here ๐Ÿ˜‚
    Guess weโ€™ll have to wait to find out more about this ๐Ÿ˜…

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    Jul 14, 2023

    To:minatika

    Yeah, might be a cultural thing to some degree ๐Ÿ˜… I believe in the US movie rating for example is much harsher compared to the German rating (FSK) when it comes to language and nudity but way more relaxed in regards to firearms or weapons in general. So yeah, cultural differences definitely play into account here! Making something that works globally is hard to impossible, I guess โ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜… And itโ€™s of course completely legitimate and even a good decision to decide not to include swear words!

    Ah I see! Yes, itโ€™s probably just a list with words that only are related to love an romance. But I see you were already quite exposed to my language ๐Ÿ˜‚
    I donโ€™t know if you know that, but there is something called โ€the dictionary of obscure sorrowsโ€œ, where someone creates new words for complex feelings that can not be explained as easily (the book version has a really beautiful cover. I had to buy it! ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜). Your idea of a multi-lingual novel reminded me of that since the author creates new words from words of different languages. Really cool read!
    But I donโ€™t know if suddenly using foreign words in a text would only verschlimbesser (๐Ÿ˜œ) the reading experience. But in general a really interesting thought (youโ€™d probably need a big, big glossary ๐Ÿ˜‚).
    And I havenโ€™t been too good in other foreign languages as well โ€ฆ only with English, since I actually used it in programming and for watching international videos, websites and so on. So itโ€™s probably more about if you actually need and want to learn a language โ€ฆ or if it is just another checkbox on a long list ๐Ÿ˜…

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