IceDonut

IceDonut

25 | him/his | European

Writing since 2016 to find the fine line between the bittersweet beauty of sorrow and the feeling of deep human connection, creating worlds that provide shelter from reality, but also embrace its way of being.
I occasionally write comments/critiques that could be short stories on their own, so sorry for all the flooded comment sections 😅
Read into my current novel "Celluloid", if you are interested!

registered at: Sep 08, 2021
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    Participant - MAL x Honeyfeed Writing Contest 2022
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    Celluloid: The Magic beneath us
    Chapter:3



    Jul 12, 2023

    To:minatika

    I just remembered back that cats really like cardboard boxes … I can really picture him cuddling up inside one 😂

    Haha, I know that feeling, when some backstory just feels misplaced 😅 But it’s not too relevant for the plot, so I think it is alright to mention it only now 😊👍

    Love and Hate might be oversaturated, but I think there are a few other graduations for this. You might (generally, this situation here is a little special) use „very“ to get graduations. But I think there are also other ways to say you like or dislike someone. Because liking and disliking someone usually also ties to certain attributes of said person and you can also refer to them: „You’re amazing!“, „You’re the worst“, „You’re one of the smartest people I know,“ „You’re a liar.“ Through the connotation of this attributes alone, you can tell if the speaker is liking or disliking someone without ever using the word love or hate. For this special situation, however you need sentences that people can shout emotionally, which narrows it down. I think insults might be the best route to take here: „You’re a fucking idiot!“ „Fuck off, dad!“ (Honeyfeed is not as strict with these). I think for the most emotional outbursts at the beginning they would also work. But in the end it remains your decision, of course! 😊
    And really? What other words are there for love in German? Do you still remember some (probably not 😅)? I’m not aware of them currently … 😅
    I mean we have „mögen“ (to like) and „gern haben“ (have dear - but it is not as formal and has a similar connotation as to like), which both can be translated to like, but for love …? 🤔
    I think that German is charmingly straightforward in the way many words consist of different words. If you know Zeitgeist for example, it consists of Zeit=Time and Geist=Spirit, which essentially explains the whole meaning alone. So I think that there might be a few words that have to do with love and Romance and consist of different words, let’s see, which come to my mind …
    Sehnsucht (Sehnen=to yearn + Sucht=obsession): The strong longing and missing of something.
    Liebeskummer (love grief): Lovesickness - there the English word is actually on par, I think!
    Zweisamkeit (two being ness ? 😅): Having an intimate togetherness with someone else.
    Einsamkeit (one being ness): Being alone and feeling lonely.
    Vertrautheit (familiar ness): Familiarity, trust and (emotional) intimacy inside a relationship.

    That much for your language trivia of the day 😂

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    Love Sorceress Cover Art (Purple Edition!)
    With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!
    Chapter:19




    Jul 12, 2023

    To:minatika

    Oh, alright, then I just misunderstood what you were trying to say! Great, then I don’t need to worry! 😊
    I’m glad you liked the reveal! So things are different from what they seem at first.
    And with a darkroom at university, I would have definitely tried my hands at that as well! 😊
    And Graphic Design is definitely an interesting field of study! In my team at work, I’m also focused more on the fronted, which means that I usually design and program the (hopefully) fancy graphics and user interfaces 😂
    So I haven’t learned it professionally (B. Sc. Business Informatics and now IT Management for the M. Sc.) but I still really enjoy a well-designed graphic. We had a few design lectures, but … it was rather on the surface, so I’m more of an autodidact in that topic 😅

    And don’t worry about replying. Maybe it’s even easier to just react on comments like „Yep, I’ve seen it“. Your novel has gotten quite big and you also seem to scurry through every comment section I try entering here 😂 I don’t know how you do this. Even last year I was fully occupied with commenting and reading and writing at the same time and it seemed to get more exponentially … especially during the end, where everybody ramped up their update intervals to get done in time. But I’m generally rather slow without a very significant quality difference compared to other stories that update twice as fast, but well … It is what it is 😅
    What I’m saying is: Take your time and don’t worry to cut down your expenses if necessary! 😉

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    Celluloid Cover Image
    Celluloid: The Magic beneath us
    Chapter:3

    Jul 11, 2023

    To:minatika

    I was just about to nicely hint you towards what you seemed to have found out yourself at the end ... 😅
    Yes! At the beginning, Takurou believed that Rakuko Kukai was the artist who created the images (the pretty girl - you can find a character artwork of her in the showcase). Yes, she "admitted" it to him, but only to protect her friend, who originally didn't want anyone else to know about her secret hobby. When Kukai was asked about software and if she had taken the images on analog film, she of course could not answer - because she has no clue about photography. She was only there to kindly help her friend with carrying.
    The other girl, Akimi Ashiya, who is the real artist behind the photos is the ojou-sama and Iyogi is the butler of her family. She is the girl on the big self-portrait and holding the camera. You can see her on the cover (I'll add an more recognizable character artwork of her with the next chapter).
    I hope I was able to clear the confusion. Maybe I have to try and get into this again to make it more clear ... I admit that it is confusing that we jump from one to the other at a time of the story, where the names are not yet cemented into the back of your mind 😅
    I'm really glad you like the way I incorporated the accent into the story - considering you were also the first one to suggest it! So thanks again for the suggestion and your feedback now! 😊

    Oh, you like photography! That's great! I think not many people have tried their hands at analog photography nowadays. I haven't actually either (I'm more the movies guy, like Takurou 😂), but for the type of character Ashiya is, I think this opinion suited her better.
    And I am totally with you on your take about digital and analog. The cover for example has been done entirely digital - even partly using the bad, bad AI. So I pondered if that didn't even undermine the whole premise of this argumentation. But yeah, author and characters are independent from one another anyway, so I just went with it. I also prefer the digital world, also for environmental and for flexibility reasons (if I'm honest, I am probably even too much in front of a screen as a web developer + doing art and writing on the computer 😅). I sometimes even get a bad conscience for buying a paperback ... so I rather buy only the ones I really want to have ... even though reading real books is much more pleasant. Haahh ... yeah ... Dreamer vs. Realist hits the nail on the head 😂
    Thank you for reading! 😊🫶

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    Celluloid Cover Image
    Celluloid: The Magic beneath us
    Chapter:3