Jun 08, 2022
A great chapter. We get to see the “Sir Try Hard” nickname’s origin, as well as a glimpse into Chiffon and Caramello’s inner personalities, the latter of which is masterfully done.
There is only one thing that I’m worried about in particular, and that is the almost lack of comedy when we’re four chapters in. I really hope I’m wrong because this has been a great read so far despite everything, but it would be a shame to see this story not going further because of it.
