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This is the former home of some of my novels, you can find them these days over on RoyalRoad!

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Dec 26, 2022

Those crystal seem like something I'd find useful for writing😅😅.

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Btw am i just dumb, or have we not really had a proper description of William - At first he was just a knight vice-captain but now i kinda feel like i need a better visual of him seeing as we having a whole arc on this😅

Creation: The Path of a God

Chapter:76

Dec 26, 2022

The Flu has a tight grip on my head - So i have nothing more to say than;
😭😭😭😭😭

A Tour of the World Between Worlds

Chapter:55

Dec 23, 2022

I'd like ti see all of Enas'es 'secret stash' 😉😉.

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It's nice seeing Kiko conent and with a goal/mission in mind - But man I'm not ready for the gang to be broken up😭😭

A Tour of the World Between Worlds

Chapter:54

Dec 23, 2022

I'm glad Emma hasn't draw the fact that her being janitor, is in fact, the reasons she died😅😅.

Honestly everyone but Julias seems like fine people, hang ups that we'll mo doubth learn about and Airi does seem dodge - But Julias, hes a twat😅.
I dunno maybe it'll turn out he has a tragic reason for being so beholdent to authority, but man i dislike him😅 - Hes the type to blame poor people for not following the rules of society properly or some other bs😂😂

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:20

Dec 22, 2022

Rika seems like someone really fun to hang out with😄😊

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:19

Dec 21, 2022

I actually thought Non was gonna be Nobyuki seeing as he seemed to ask fall off the cliff - Which begs the question, is he around somewhere too?😄🤔

A Tour of the World Between Worlds

Chapter:52

Dec 20, 2022

God damn😭😭😭😭

A Tour of the World Between Worlds

Chapter:51

Dec 19, 2022

And congrats on finishing the book❤️

A Tour of the World Between Worlds

Chapter:49

Dec 19, 2022

I'd like to think Azul is a neutral party, but man he's a pro at being sus😂😅

A Tour of the World Between Worlds

Chapter:49

Dec 18, 2022

To:Creation

I see😅

Creation: The Path of a God

Chapter:74

Dec 18, 2022

To:Creation

Regular guards are strong enough to handle these monsters and bandit number? Dang, thems some good bodygoaurds!😄

Creation: The Path of a God

Chapter:72

Dec 18, 2022

K so, I'm enjoying these chapters alot😊, they've got atmostphere and tension and honestly I like William, Vasilera and Klaus a bit more then the main cast😅.

That said, I am sort of struggling to see why this much time is being given to the road trip?😅
Is vasilera gonna bring it up in future conflict between her and Hans perhaps? Or is it purely just, I guess worldbuilding?

Its seems a bit diversionary, like a spin off in the middle of a book - Good stuff but a bit disorienting pacing and structure wise😅👍

Creation: The Path of a God

Chapter:74

Dec 18, 2022

They mentioned a while back hoping no travelers would be in the area owing to the empires movements - But how do the travelers ever take such roads if you need powerful mages just to detect threats😅😢

Creation: The Path of a God

Chapter:72

Dec 17, 2022

Nawwww their interactions are really cute!❤️😊

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:17

Dec 17, 2022

Yusei takes a surprise lead!!!

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:16

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