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This is the former home of some of my novels, you can find them these days over on RoyalRoad!

registered at: Oct 14, 2021

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Dec 08, 2022

Nannnnniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!

Red-Black Course

Chapter:23

Dec 08, 2022

Only a little thing, but a few typos/grammer thing in the top half of this - Nothing major, just theres normally so few i thought i should mention it😊👍

Red-Black Course

Chapter:22

Dec 07, 2022

There be foul play here wardens🧐🧐

Red-Black Course

Chapter:21

Dec 06, 2022

Minor thing, but i wonder why you didn't just have an extra cabin so that it was just the four girls, without needing to write out the fifth😅?

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:10

Dec 06, 2022

Cupids just a big softie😉😄

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:9

Dec 04, 2022

Kiko is older then i imaged then? If she was with the empiror this long then she must be nearer 20 than 30? Intresterting🤔

A Tour of the World Between Worlds

Chapter:38

Dec 03, 2022

Small thing but kinda surprised Keiko would mind guard duty considering what we know about her past as some sort of bodyguard - Then again she did seem pretty tired😂

A Tour of the World Between Worlds

Chapter:36

Dec 03, 2022

Someone needs to get Emma so dog threats😅😅

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:7

Dec 03, 2022

Goalllllllllllllll! 😂😄.

Also great chapter name - And they wouldn't try to make my two bous fught each other or bitleo? No, they couldn't?!😭

Red-Black Course

Chapter:18

Dec 02, 2022

Ren asks a mighty find question don't he😉.

And for whatever reason i really love the line about 1 way arrows, kinda sums up the cupid character in a single sentance😊😄

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:5

Dec 01, 2022

I was about to soujd the alarm thinking this was the 40k dinner scene - But its ok, no alarm needed, just a regular dinner scene😎😉

Creation: The Path of a God

Chapter:63

Nov 30, 2022

You do a great job of making the villains very hatable, cheating bastards😅

Red-Black Course

Chapter:15

Nov 30, 2022

Some interesting targets acquired 😎.

Be interesting to see how cupid reacts if they pose Ren's original plan to him😅😉

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:4

Nov 29, 2022

Man you're establishing these folks really well - Gonna be great to see how they all develop😄

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:2

Nov 29, 2022

Not sure how useful this is as feedback - But thought you should know this story is really easy to settle back into after a gap, felt at home with Rex, Zain and the set up pretty much instantly again😊👍

Red-Black Course

Chapter:14

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