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Hopefully, one day my writings will become a book that many people come to love and be inspired by.
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Feb 18, 2025
To:Kirb
they say if you read it 10 times you get a free bobblehead...
To:Mech
i think We all have a little nerd in Us. But thanks! Wanted to try something less dense and chill for the this go round. The next one will be BL...
Feb 12, 2025
the language idea is interesting and theres some funny moments. i wonder how this will develop into an end of the world situation.
Feb 11, 2025
oh, i do love the dialogue. i didn't know how much i could enjoy a story like this one but thus i am here.
hmmmm...i will keep reading to understand more and maybe it's meant to be on the questioning side. It's a lot of info to take in but i really like the dialogue and Kael. He's already my fav. i can see their dynamic is already passionate and witty. of course, i will keep reading, onward!
Feb 10, 2025
i really like this idea of the prologue being some sort of a time capsule. i don't know why it gave me Orange vibes for a moment. im curious to see how this develops
funny as usual, i held a couple chuckles back bc im in a library and don't want to stand out.
Feb 04, 2025
This is really emotive and poignant. i am truly fascinated by the concept and am curious to see how this will unfold!
Jan 25, 2025
think this was a pretty cool story. The concept, some of the characterization was done well. i feel as if though others have said a lot so i won't say much, but i did enjoy reading this. There were some parts on the tour that may have extended a bit much, and the prose i will chalk up to your style. Sometimes it broke readership due to the amount of run on sentences, but ultimately i think that is simply my preference. i don't 100% understand why Zenith did what they did, but i don't think it was big enough for me to say it was a plot point that was wasted or anything. i think Lena was good for the most part, her being unsufferable made sense bc she's her and her sister dying actually was a direct consequence of her negligence. i think the last chapter was great and was an embodiment of what i enjoyed about this story. The reflective and poignant tone. anyways, good luck!
This explains some things and it makes sense but i suppose the reason as to why they would do this doesn't make sense. It would only track bad press to a tour they funded, for their artists. Like is Maya signed to Zenith? Maybe i missed the angle.
Jan 24, 2025
To:lolitroy
LMAO i am not chosen
the solution to helping Elise feel less isolated is by taking away a couple of her sets which would make her feel more isolated? seems counterintuitive on the crew ofc its going to be taken badly
Jan 23, 2025
To:obliviousbushtit
Yeah, these are hard times to convey especially if they are subtle and everyone sees different things which is why writing is interesting! a great story
i suppose in a world of transhumans and artificial digital worlds, falling in love with a robot wouldn't be the worst thing. anyways, i love this chapter. the muted poignancy is why i enjoy this story
this part kind of reminds me of the avatar switching that happens in psycho pass. It's a cool concept & like duh Lena! ofc people didn't come to see the aging star lmao take the free press