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Aug 27, 2022
Ooooohhh, good beginning. And I LOVE the cover art.
Aug 21, 2022
I am a sucker for a good zombie story and this one is really good. Looks like I have competition! 👍
Aug 02, 2022
Thank you.
Jun 11, 2022
Awesome. Such good writing and I just LOVE the characters. 😘
what an interesting concept! Can't wait to see what happens next. Your writing is pretty good too. Best of luck.
2nd chapter and I still like it. :-)
Ha ha, what a funny way to start a story. I like their bickering. Look forward to see what happens next.
I'm really curious to see where you're going with this story - it seems like you're writing from a place of deep thoughts. It might be easier to follow if there were less "noises". Don't take them all out, just cut them back because it distracts from the story. The story is all....
Jun 06, 2022
Ooooo, love the prospects here, excited to read more. Just have to love a good dystopian plot.
Jun 01, 2022
To:ArufaBeta
Thank you for your comments, I will endeavor to work on those in next few chapters.
May 31, 2022
Looking forward to more chapters. I just posted my first story - going to enter into contest. I think. Its called Inversion, let me know if you get a chance to ck it out.
May 29, 2022
Just skimming through some stories and I've been sucked into your world. Love it when things may not be what they seem. Looking forward to reading more...
May 21, 2022
At first I loved the action in this. But the descriptions went on and on, phrases sometimes repeating, so eventually I lost interest and just skipped to the end. I wonder if the middle sections were edited more, would that retain the tension and excitement better?
This story was wonderfully poetic. Although I'm not quite sure who the lady-love was supposed to be, it was intriguing.