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A bored engineer who wanted to write a little bit as a hobby with the dream of giving up on being an engineer.
Feb 15, 2023
To:Elukard
Now makes more sense indeed. Thank you for clarifying.
Nice fight, the whole castle one. The only thing I have to complain through this whole bit was that the shaman's speech seemed too clean. If the average shaman can speak this smartly, it makes you think goblins would be more than some random disjointed tribes, especially when they take less than a month to reach this level.
Feb 11, 2023
It is... FOR SCIENCE!!!
And the bets are over now. The black hole somehow started losing density and the Earth is in the path of salvation, just another push and all will be in place.
Feb 10, 2023
If you can't win, you just have to cheat. But I didn't say this... 😋
Feb 07, 2023
They've been goblinated.
Feb 04, 2023
You can certainly read her like a book, Yuyo, but your interpretation skills are terrible...
Feb 03, 2023
Oho, interesting. Very interesting indeed.
Well, maybe they're carrying a Priestess around and a certain goblin-specialized adventurer will make his way around there almost at the same time for unknown reasons. At least one of them may survive.
Or they actually have a good plan. I'm not sure this time.
Building Suzuka's and Bill's partnership is interesting by itself, but I'd say you should speed up the pace a little in the future. It's taking too long for anything important to happen as is, especially when some scenes are mostly similar to things that happened before.
Not even having a simple token prize at every duck is such a douche move...
Jan 31, 2023
Bill's all right, don't worry. It's more about the narration bits. But if you use translate, then I understand the problems I'm pointing out. It's the kind of thing you usually get from there, and I'm somewhat appalled that I failed to notice this until now...
Take a look at the verb tenses across this chapter and the one before it, you're mixing tenses a little wrong sometimes. On more important matters, Bill's fun, an asshole for sure, but a fun one. I like the lad and will get quite angry when you kill him.
Lad's a crazy magnet then... Fun constitution, would recommend.
Jan 30, 2023
Well, well, I do like achievements.
I know a certain guy that would love to visit this forest...