Jan 21, 2023
The last few paragraphs were really hard to understand... Like, I read them three times and I'm still unsure if I got it right. Some things that I think happened there are very weird too, Rupe Goldenberg levels of chain reaction there.
Also, even since that first attack, Suzuka's speech got real weird. As if she regressed some years there (until the point when she's panicking in front of the wolf, there it's normal). Feels way too childish from how a 14yrs old talks, but that's that.