Jul 07, 2022
Loved your opening hook, it got me interested immediately! You've done an excellent job of endearing me to the characters and learning about them through their dialog and actions right away as well!
This was one of my favorite lines in this chapter, "...and as the bike sped through the deteriorating road, so did Kuroiwa's sanity erode." Genuis!
When they jumped over the ravine, oh my gosh it was such a perfect description I could nearly see it in slow motion. 🥰
An amazing prologue all around!! Take care!💕