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Doremine

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Nov 05, 2023

To:excalibur

Thank you for your feedback, it means a lot to me that you took the time to read my story and share your thoughts on it. Thank you!

Mirror Of Souls

Chapter:0

Oct 19, 2023

To:Saika

Thanks for the feedback, including your thoughts on why the doctor didn't do anything.
It's because I want the story to be interpreted in different ways and the reader can use their imagination to fill in the blanks
Like what if the doctor was actually Eros himself, and he chose to surrender the girl to Thanatos' invitation because this is what her fate is or why isthe doctor knows about "the invitation of Thanatos" after the flower petals scattered by the wind. could it be a representation of Thanatos' invitation? And why is the doctor have been aware of it? "
Alternatively, it is also possible that Thanatos stopped the time himself when he found out the doctor was aware of it —in order to offer the girl a one-time chance to reconsider her decision and choose to live or to die. The possibility for imagination and multiple interpretations adds another layer of intrigue and mystery, making the story even more interesting to read.The scene may have been confusing, but I want to give the readers a chance to use their own imagination and it's up to them on how they interpret the story in their own way. I'm glad you like it🥰

Mirror Of Souls

Chapter:0

Oct 19, 2023

To:Mashin Botan

I appreciate that you took the time to point out the areas where I can improve. I'll definitely consider your suggestions and try to revise the story to make it even better. Thank you sm😘

Mirror Of Souls

Chapter:0

Oct 19, 2023

To:Naru_Sheny

Hey there, thanks for the insightful feedback!, I appreciate it. I'll certainly take into consideration your points and make the necessary changes for the improvement of my novel. I hope you'll give the revised version a chance as well.
To address the specific points you mentioned, I'd like to thank you for the constructive criticism.
1. I agree with you that the leukemia diagnosis is a bit far-fetched. I'll definitely make the changes so that it sounds more realistic.
2. You're right, I'll rework the second paragraph so that it flows more clearly and makes the timeline more consistent.
3. I'll also make sure to vary my word choices and avoid repetition.
4. I'll try to make the scene transitions more coherent and logical, so that readers can easily follow them.
5. English is not my mother tongue I'm sorry about that hehe😅

Mirror Of Souls

Chapter:0

May 02, 2023

I Like the idea of using third persons point of view✨keep it up!

Hacker Class

Chapter:0

Apr 27, 2023

To:Civilian

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far and I really appreciate your support and I look forward to more interactions as I continue to develop the story!🥰

After the Limelight: An Unwanted Boom in Fame

Chapter:1

Apr 25, 2023

To:ZenyxUchiha

I have not, but I'll check it out! . Thank you for the recommendation, I look forward to discovering what's in store for me through the pages of red hood In the forest 😌

After the Limelight: An Unwanted Boom in Fame

Chapter:6

Apr 21, 2023

Not bad either. It was a fun read. I'm Looking forward for the next chapter and so on😌

Plains Across The Woodland

Chapter:1

Apr 21, 2023

To:Syed Al Wasee

Glad you enjoyed reading it!

I'll definitely check out your novel too, thanks for the recommend 😇

After the Limelight: An Unwanted Boom in Fame

Chapter:0

Apr 16, 2023

To:lemoon

me either

After the Limelight: An Unwanted Boom in Fame

Chapter:7

Apr 16, 2023

To:yuru

Thank you so much for noticing❤️

After the Limelight: An Unwanted Boom in Fame

Chapter:6

Apr 10, 2023

To:literarygirl

uh hi?

After the Limelight: An Unwanted Boom in Fame

Chapter:1

Mar 25, 2023

beautiful

Koyomi's Collection

Chapter:1

Sep 07, 2022

this is probably my fav chap😳

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:13

Aug 15, 2022

beautiful

Why is the Trip to the Demon World Never Peaceful?!

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