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I Know Nobody really read my stories but I want to pretend someone does
for any violent comment and reaction. 💌:desireecavite27@gmail.com
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Nov 05, 2023
To:excalibur
Thank you for your feedback, it means a lot to me that you took the time to read my story and share your thoughts on it. Thank you!
Oct 19, 2023
To:Saika
Thanks for the feedback, including your thoughts on why the doctor didn't do anything. It's because I want the story to be interpreted in different ways and the reader can use their imagination to fill in the blanks Like what if the doctor was actually Eros himself, and he chose to surrender the girl to Thanatos' invitation because this is what her fate is or why isthe doctor knows about "the invitation of Thanatos" after the flower petals scattered by the wind. could it be a representation of Thanatos' invitation? And why is the doctor have been aware of it? " Alternatively, it is also possible that Thanatos stopped the time himself when he found out the doctor was aware of it —in order to offer the girl a one-time chance to reconsider her decision and choose to live or to die. The possibility for imagination and multiple interpretations adds another layer of intrigue and mystery, making the story even more interesting to read.The scene may have been confusing, but I want to give the readers a chance to use their own imagination and it's up to them on how they interpret the story in their own way. I'm glad you like it🥰
To:Mashin Botan
I appreciate that you took the time to point out the areas where I can improve. I'll definitely consider your suggestions and try to revise the story to make it even better. Thank you sm😘
To:Naru_Sheny
Hey there, thanks for the insightful feedback!, I appreciate it. I'll certainly take into consideration your points and make the necessary changes for the improvement of my novel. I hope you'll give the revised version a chance as well. To address the specific points you mentioned, I'd like to thank you for the constructive criticism. 1. I agree with you that the leukemia diagnosis is a bit far-fetched. I'll definitely make the changes so that it sounds more realistic. 2. You're right, I'll rework the second paragraph so that it flows more clearly and makes the timeline more consistent. 3. I'll also make sure to vary my word choices and avoid repetition. 4. I'll try to make the scene transitions more coherent and logical, so that readers can easily follow them. 5. English is not my mother tongue I'm sorry about that hehe😅
May 02, 2023
I Like the idea of using third persons point of view✨keep it up!
Apr 27, 2023
To:Civilian
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far and I really appreciate your support and I look forward to more interactions as I continue to develop the story!🥰
Apr 25, 2023
To:ZenyxUchiha
I have not, but I'll check it out! . Thank you for the recommendation, I look forward to discovering what's in store for me through the pages of red hood In the forest 😌
Apr 21, 2023
Not bad either. It was a fun read. I'm Looking forward for the next chapter and so on😌
To:Syed Al Wasee
Glad you enjoyed reading it!
I'll definitely check out your novel too, thanks for the recommend 😇
Apr 16, 2023
To:lemoon
me either
To:yuru
Thank you so much for noticing❤️
Apr 10, 2023
To:literarygirl
uh hi?
Mar 25, 2023
beautiful
Sep 23, 2022
To:Deleted User
really you think so too?😍you always say nice things yieet very much appreciated😌
really it is?yiee thank you
