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Sep 10, 2022
This is really good and the cover actuelly pretty cool. I wish you could apply a an atmosperic effect to the noise image on the head so it looks less edited in
really cool concept and cover art. Praise to you and the artist
To:Arifureta
Thats unfortunate. I dont think its that big of a problem though, when someone sees your book in the list the image is way smaller and i dont think people will notice unless they click on it. I also dont think anyone will be like "this book must be shit cause the cover is low rez!"
well a bit, not exactly but close enough i think
that thing on the cover looks like the circle in xerxse in fmab, doesnt it?
I think it suffers from being split from the first part of the prologue, maybe think about puting them together
Really strong start though i think i saw one or two spelling mistakes
But the cover art itself is amazing, you should maybe try to get it with a higher resolution
Ey mate, your cover seems to be a little, i dont know how to say this, streched out.
Is it intentional that the knight in the title is writen kNight?
The cover gives me french fairytale-vibes
Dont get me wrong but i just never saw a connection between shounen and strategy
chess+shounen seems like a combination that just doesnt work
To:Dragnix54
dont worry, i dont expect this novel to perform good anyways
oh, and yes, its a reverence
