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Jul 30, 2022

I do find this setting that you've set up to be interesting. Would have liked to see examples of the Truth system in play rather than just name-dropping it to add on to the distinct views that each characters has on Fides.

Also, this one line is a pet peeve for me. "Looks like one of the semiconductors got slightly dinged up."
You might as well just name a part here, because it's like looking at a toy and saying that "one of the plastics is chipped".

Infallibility

Chapter:2

Jul 30, 2022

Adam is sounding more and more like an ostricized teddy bear that just needs a hug.

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:13

Jul 30, 2022

Emma just gives off the aura of the kid that you don't want to take the candy away from, haha.

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:11

Jul 28, 2022

To:cielink

Hold onto that thought. I think you're onto something. 😊

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:5

Jul 28, 2022

To:cielink

Who said that her rampages would be due to him? 😛

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:4

Jul 28, 2022

To:cielink

I actually thought about a scene to shave down his nose at one point, haha.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:2

Jul 28, 2022

To:cielink

You're in for a fun dynamic.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:1

Jul 28, 2022

I would have thrown Wolfis out of the window and laughed as he was eaten... just saying.

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:10

Jul 28, 2022

To:Xiellion

The Isle of Crumpets exists too, in one of my kid's games, haha.

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:7

Jul 28, 2022

These boyfriends are getting progressively more disturbing. I wonder what the gentlemanly code will do in the face of needless murder.

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:8

Jul 28, 2022

Baguette Country... next thing you know, he'll pull out marksmanship business card throwing skills from the Isle of Crumpets, courtesy of his great-grandpa.

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:7

Jul 28, 2022

He better not lose the fedora.

On a side note, Tomoyuki does have a point. The ex-boyfriends do seem to be a little on the single-minded side. Almost intentionally so... not to mention that there's 7 of them...

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:5

Jul 28, 2022

I thought it was an actual horse too... All of Ori's ex-boyfriends lining up for a confrontation like this is some kind of disturbing purgatory trial. It couldn't be that kind of gimmick, now could it...?

Btw, I see Monty Python quotes 😏

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:4

Jul 28, 2022

To:Dracors

Chiffon isn't meant to embody the feel of a vampire, but moreso, the typical crazy person you would associate with licking the blood from their weapons, but in a cuter way, haha.

You know something is up when an arc starts off with it revealing a crafted plan. 😏

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:17

Jul 28, 2022

To:Xiellion

No lolis were harmed in the making of this story...

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:10

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