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Xiellion

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One-third author, one-third gym rat, one-third med student.

registered at: Jun 06, 2022

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Sep 21, 2022

Beautiful descriptive story-telling, the environment is just an absolute vibe. Fight scenes were pretty engaging and violent, despite how flowery it was.

This is just my opinion, but I feel like the starting of the story felt slow and there seemed to be some borderline purple prose moments. Not sure if it's because I'm the type who likes things fast-paced though. But most of the time, the prose focuses on being immersed with the environment rather than the narrative itself. But it does make up for it with the emotional impacts some of the scenes bring throughout the chapters.

(Just my opinion) The social developments between the characters seemed pretty weak, might be because you're too focused on the environment of the story.

Doesn't change the fact that this novel reads like a colorful garden shined upon by the ever graceful light of the moon.

Very cool novel, Petri. Sad to see you died before you could make a better conclusion.

- from an ordinary reader, not an expert critic

City of Flowers

Chapter:19

Sep 20, 2022

i was wondering all this time why there was a girl's love tag......

City of Flowers

Chapter:17

Sep 20, 2022

Noooo they took potadd!

City of Flowers

Chapter:16

Sep 20, 2022

Figured Jackson would go hug on her Cirsium legs instead...

City of Flowers

Chapter:15

Sep 20, 2022

"touch some grass"

City of Flowers

Chapter:14

Sep 20, 2022

Anti-vegetarians be like:

City of Flowers

Chapter:13

Sep 20, 2022

10/10 title

City of Flowers

Chapter:12

Sep 20, 2022

Girl must have been writing City of Flowers with such flowery p-Rose

City of Flowers

Chapter:11

Sep 19, 2022

To:T.K. 月狐

Thanks for reading, Dragon Boy! May you see Dustin in your dreams....

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:36

Sep 19, 2022

To:T.K. 月狐

Dont worry, he will be reincarnated as a better boy named Scott Sightsear

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:35

Sep 19, 2022

To:F.C Fondness

Dustin POV: slep......or.....maybe

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:18

Sep 18, 2022

Man should just photosynthesis and chill

City of Flowers

Chapter:9

Sep 18, 2022

Looks like they won't let Iris "leave"

City of Flowers

Chapter:8

Sep 18, 2022

To:T.K. 月狐

That's a story for another day......(maybe)

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:31

Sep 18, 2022

To:T.K. 月狐

Seems like you can't survive 1 chapter without him lol

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:30

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