Sep 11, 2022
Honestly, I don't think I could make a good paragraph about this novel. But I'll try anyway.
I admire the way you incorporate medical shizz into prose, especially when it comes to fight scenes. It feels so brutal and fleshed out in a sense. Combine that with a bunch of meaningful descriptions and it all pictures out so well in my mind. Then you got the typical psychological and philosophical mix, which really gets you thinking about the deeper aspects of life. The plot twists of this story always seemed to hit me like a shotgun, not knowing what to expect and just being surprised at all the twisted reveals. Not sure how you do it, but you managed to make me feel like crying. Emotions are a yes.
(THIS IS A MAYBE NOT GOOD TAKE): The only thing that might be slightly off is that it feels like there doesn't seem to be a clear main goal for the story. Like I'm not sure where the story is actually going. It kind of felt like events just happened out of nowhere. Wasn't sure which direction it was supposed to go. It doesn't change the fact that the story played out so well for me though. Maybe I'm just trippin again.
Anyways, good job, king. I'm glad I'm not competing against you in the cyberpunk genre lmao.