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just a writer from the sprawling midwest
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Jun 10, 2022
To:Armorien
I'll try! Deadlines are my bane but I gotta do it!
Jun 09, 2022
To:Feyblue
Possibly some of those in this volume if I can pace it right. Perhaps. Maybe? Thanks for reading. 😅
To:Hungry Sheep
ME-E-AY. ❤️
To:Lemons
I'm happy that you're excited! But yeah, I just had this scene in my head where the MC is just sick beyond belief. The first draft had a lot more tummy rumbles but wasn't too happy with that one.
To:Pike
My knack for insane fantasy naming conventions will haunt me forever. The world of YTTAIOH is influenced by a few things, but there will be just as much features on the land as well as air and sea. I guess it all depends how many field trips I take the prospective students on. I'm looking forward to your continued readership, thank you!
To:Gulfstream
I hope to maintain your interest! Though, I will say that I stared at my word processor for at least an hour blankly before I settled on this opening. Hopefully, I will not have such issues with Chapter 1!
Yep. This is actually a Government Issued Troll. Giving a lot of borderline delinquent vibes, but not quite. Right now she's just a character who's going "fufufufufu~" every five seconds. Again, snappy dialogue, funny, and engaging. Can't wait for the next one!
I love how personal the first person perspective feels here. Sharp dialogue for this hopeless idiot's romantic aspirations. Really like where this is going so far!
To:Metanoia
Yeah, I had to throw some characterization in there! Didn't want it all to be introspective and semi-omniscient narration explaining the world. Thanks for the read! Hope to keep you on board. 😎
The cover is wonderful, but we really should point out how the descriptive writing flows well and is rather engaging for a debut chapter! This is gonna be good. Maybe even better than the cover!
I love the characterization here! Snappy dialogue, flows really well, and very humorous (the "oh no" line had me smiling). The ending with him being butted on the head from behind(?) makes me very curious to see this Aiko person. Looking forward to it!
To:Deleted User
Thank you for the comment! I was a little worried this chapter was a little too brief and didn't go into the light worldbuilding I kicked off the story with, but I'm happy it's at least enjoyable on some level!
Great sense of dialogue. Solid descriptions. Heavenly concept. I'm really engaged so far and I'm looking forward to reading more!
Azama sure does ramble from his POV a lot! Don't mind it, of course. Overall, a punchy, entertaining setup to start out this webnovel. Kind of curious how he'll engage with his soon-to-be students.
Jun 08, 2022
This is the most light novel concept I've ever heard and I'm clapping a standing ovation right now. I cannot wait to read more!
