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just a writer from the sprawling midwest

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registered at: Jun 08, 2022

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Jun 13, 2022

To:Beetrix🐝✨

Appreciate the support! I hope I don't disappoint!

Y: The Tides Are In Our Hearts

Chapter:2

Jun 13, 2022

That was quite poetic. I agree with the other comments, the descriptiveness is rich and it is intriguing. A great foundational piece that sets things in motion.

City of Flowers

Chapter:0

Jun 13, 2022

Little rough in some places, but the general premise draws the reader in with some pretty solid character moments from the jump. I'll be reading along to see how this develops. 😎

Roeyan Saga

Chapter:1

Jun 12, 2022

To:Feyblue

More that it was *on* the test. I should be clear that she's already passed the entrance exam, which is why she's on the island. Might do with some slight edits down the line.

Y: The Tides Are In Our Hearts

Chapter:2

Jun 12, 2022

Us Fantasy Academy people gotta stick together! Anyway, really good start here. Solid descriptive writing and enough worldbuilding to get us to connect to the foundation you're building here.

Adventurer Academy: Memoirs of the Lynx

Chapter:0

Jun 12, 2022

Lot of typography that needs some work, including in the synopsis. Beyond formatting, your story's foundation is here with some dialogue that feels alright. I agree that the flow is rather clunky and it doesn't read smoothly. I think there is potential here, though. Keep working hard!

Returned by a Thousand Times

Chapter:1

Jun 11, 2022

To:swagmc

I sell anime tropes and anime accessories. 😅 Glad, you've been enjoying it. Happy to have you.

Y: The Tides Are In Our Hearts

Chapter:2

Jun 11, 2022

To:Rhiannon Altea

I appreciate the thoughts, thank you!

Y: The Tides Are In Our Hearts

Chapter:1

Jun 11, 2022

To:Fuzzy Rabid Usagi

Probably because of his personality and his own lack of fulfillment in life. 😎

My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!

Chapter:3

Jun 11, 2022

Sharp writing with a... somewhat unconventional structure? The fourth wall breaking was a bit much for me, but the concept seems strong here. You have my interest piqued. 😎

The Dreamer's Club at Yūkan Academy

Chapter:1

Jun 11, 2022

To:Pike

It is an anime world. So a lot. Thanks for reading!

Y: The Tides Are In Our Hearts

Chapter:2

Jun 11, 2022

He's so utterly hopeless. I love their dynamic because... it's just not the typical tsundere-MC thing. They're both utter idiotic otaku and don't know how to talk normally to each other. I wonder what'd it take for Koi to shed some of her armor? Going to be fun when we get there.

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:8

Jun 11, 2022

This entire chapter is just nervous anxiety introspection and it works. The mundane can be pretty engaging when it wants to be and this is just the kind of important lead-in's we need to get to where we need to go. It's good introspection, too. 😎

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:7

Jun 11, 2022

To:Deleted User

You must have a type! Thanks for the read! 😎

Y: The Tides Are In Our Hearts

Chapter:2

Jun 11, 2022

To:Kya Hon

Yeah, a lot of my writing oftentimes emphasizes things that are shown for clarification. Some people vibe with it, others don't. It is what it is, I think. I could do some edits to go into what Miieie knows about phaetonmobiles if needed, though. Will think on that.

Thanks for the critique!

Y: The Tides Are In Our Hearts

Chapter:2

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