Feb 21, 2026
Why is it the end. I'm sad. Anyway ಥ‿ಥ
It was really a great story, very loloesque. And that's what makes it peak. Nobody else but you would've been able to write it.
If I had to name elements I liked less I'd say (I swear it's not only because I wanted to read moar) like someone else said in the comments I'd have really loved to have the Youji/Touma discussion. For two reasons. One, that would have been kinda the perfect way to close the stabbing debate and all the old accident thing. Two with last chapter (and in just a single chapter) you made out of Touma a strong character. Really. How many people would still want to talk after getting chairs thrown at them? And at the same time he was touching, had this weak side with these laughs/smiles of his. Really peak character. All of this to say damn he really deserves more space.
Another thing I'd mention but it's kinda more subjective, is Rima's backsto. I'm not sure how to phrase it, but the way her problems were revealed sounded a bit too... Indirect? Mm. You built up the ''mystery'' around her background a way that focused on Isao's and Youji's playing a part into it. They were implied. Whereas when Rima's problems were discovered it was after blackscreen, all thanks to Mr Clarence. He talked with her, he solved it. We know what happened, the MCs know, but it's indirect speech. It felt a bit impersonal after the teasing-readers-about-her-situation-the-MCs-are-worried-about-it. So it might be just me but idk... Maybe if at least there was instead a passage showing in Rima's or Mr Clarence's pov the hidden scene maybe it wouldn't have felt this way.
Next, so what I loved the most are def def def the chatting parts. They were so, so peak. In the menawhile hot funny and showing lots of things about the characters without telling much. Dynamic and niomy. Peak.
The characters also all have very distinct voices and they're greatly built-up. My favs are... Well actually I like many of them;;;;;; Teddy, Yamada, Mr Clarence they all have such a comforting vibe around them. Isao is peak schizo. There are so many funny details in the narration which were so great from his POV. Like the naming. ''cannibal Miyo'' ''incubus Touma'' that's awesome 😂 Touma is def one of my big favs. He had the role of the character I usually dislike and shoo to go offscreen but. Touma was, well, actually you know I just said it above. So yeah damn the characters were great.
The plot simple, just SOL about a relationship and discovering what the stabbing incident was about. And it's okay. It doesn't need moar because it's SOL romance. The prose and the relationships between the characters are crunchy enough to entertain.
So, another great story, glad I read it~
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