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- Shizuku Tsukishima, Whisper of the Heart

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Feb 02, 2023

To:Astral

Hey so it turns out I forgot to upload the chapter with the literal climax to this story 😂
Chapter 15 was the missing chapter, now that it's here hopefully things will tie together better if you'd like to read the actual completed story

Boundary Scramble

Chapter:16

Jan 29, 2023

Getting some real Kyon vibes from this chapter. I really like how every POV character is pretty distinct and memorable from one another

My Dad is an Otaku, My Mom is a Fujoshi, and I Wish I Was Dead

Chapter:6

Jan 11, 2023

To:Astral

Thanks for reading! This is the first ever story I wrote for a contest and was really struggling by the end of it with the word and time limits. It was great experience for the past Honeyfeed summer contest but it's unfortunate this story had to suffer for it. Nevertheless, I love your comment about it being a fever dream - that's exactly the mood I was going for. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading until the end!

Boundary Scramble

Chapter:16

Jan 09, 2023

To:Astral

Thanks for reading and commenting! I haven't read any of monogatari but I have seen the first few seasons of the anime so it was definitely a big inspiration. Glad you like it!

Boundary Scramble

Chapter:2

Dec 12, 2022

Read through most of this before the voting deadline but didn't get a chance to comment until now - great job! I really enjoyed all the twists and turns the story took. As others have mentioned I also appreciated the way the prose changed from flowery and metaphoric to much more focused and bare when things turned against Chiffon. Chiffon's and Carmelo Anthony's dynamic was great too.

Good luck in the contest!

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:25

Dec 12, 2022

To:yitsuin

Will be more apparent later, but I fell down a rabbit hole of Japanese baseball while writing this. You just want to write, but you need to fact check something - and now you have 20 tabs open

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Chapter:9

Dec 12, 2022

To:yitsuin

I've fallen into the worldbuilding trap too many times to count haha. I also plead guilty to turning simple stories into complex monstrosities. Nearly the entire story is through Natsuki's perspective - I had the resist the constant urge to explore other POVs haha

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Chapter:8

Dec 12, 2022

To:yitsuin

I tried to incorporate all the fun and frustration that comes with writing into the story lol. And Natsuki's inspiration was inspired by a similar scene in the novel Dandelion Wine by Ray Bradbury, which played a huge influence in writing this story, highly recommend it

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Chapter:7

Dec 12, 2022

To:yitsuin

I really wanted to incorporate a lot of imagery and the like in this so I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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Chapter:4

Dec 12, 2022

To:yitsuin

School slice of life anime is my jam so I'm glad I was finally able to make a club of my own. I also experimented with some meta-ness in this story - it's rough around the edges but I really enjoyed it

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Chapter:3

Dec 12, 2022

Thanks for reading! I had a lot of fun during my middle/high school fanfiction phase and same here, I write a lot more original fiction now

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Chapter:2

Dec 12, 2022

To:Sevenlock

Thanks for reading! I really enjoyed Faustic so I'm glad to see you enjoyed this story too. I agree about the contest - for better or worse, I went with existential drama rather than contest drama, with the contest itself wrapping up pretty neatly afterwards. With the benefit of hindsight, I think adding more contest-specific drama would've been a cool avenue to explore.

Anyways, thanks for reading to the end! I'm looking forward to your next work too

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Chapter:30

Dec 12, 2022

To:Sevenlock

What are we, some kind of Web Novel Club?

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Chapter:28

Dec 12, 2022

To:Sevenlock

I'm glad you enjoyed their interaction so much! Me personally, I was actually a little dissatisfied with their conversation - I thought I wrapped up things too quickly and neatly. But I'm glad you liked it!

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Chapter:28

Dec 12, 2022

To:Sevenlock

Who knows? Perhaps you would've been a finalist too!

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Chapter:22

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