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"Ah, I love being a writer!" - Shizuku Tsukishima, Whisper of the Heart
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Nov 04, 2022
Late to the party here but great job with this! Like someone mentioned below I really enjoyed the Girls Last Tour vibes I got from this. I liked all the characters and their interactions. I think it would've been cool to see more scenes with all four together and Emiko working on her magic but considering the restraints of the contest I thought you did a good job. I also thought the direction you took with Emiko's final wish was really interesting too. Thanks for writing and sharing!
Oct 30, 2022
To:Makech
Thanks for reading until the end! No matter how frustrating the writing could get sometimes, I had a blast writing this. It really is great to see people enjoying it. Until next time!
Thanks for sticking with the story! This was my first ever attempt at doing something meta. Biggest lesson here is that less is more - if I could do it over again, I would make it less on the nose. But perhaps this chapter walked so a future story could run
Thanks for reading! One of my goals for this story was to really work on show, not tell. I think the most fun with that came with describing emotions
Thank you reading! I thought I nailed down Natsuki's and Masako's personalities early on, but I had some trouble with Yumiko - glad to see that she's making a good impression
Thanks for reading! I still get the pants-shitting feeling every time I get a notification here
Thanks for reading! Natsuki's story was based on my own experiences with writing - except that it took me until college to start writing again lol
Oct 21, 2022
Thanks for reading! Perhaps if I ever get the courage to unlock my vault of middle school writing
Sep 21, 2022
To:Ochroleucous
Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed it! I really appreciate all the support
Sep 08, 2022
To:otkrlj
Thanks for sticking it out to the end! This was simultaneously the most enjoyable and most frustrating thing I've ever written but man was it fun. Glad to see people out there are liking it. I also saw your rec in discord - really appreciate it, it means a lot. Thanks and glad you enjoyed it!
Glad you enjoy it! Kenji becoming a mangaka in School Rumble, the Mysterious Girlfriend Y arc of Mysterious Girlfriend X, and Sayonara Eri were huge influences on this, along with my own experiences with the contest lmao
No kidding same here. I quit social media because I got obsessed with my numbers - to later realize I was doing the same thing except with the views on my story was a real kick in the pants
Glad you enjoyed it! It was a lot of fun to write
Thanks for reading! I always try to include a theme or two in my writing. I used to deliver them with the grace and subtly of a sledgehammer but I'm trying to improve on that lol
