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I usually read back as a courtesy but if you're gonna read JUST so I return the favor, heed my warning: I won't

apparently my writing style is too avant-garde for the weebs or some shit but if you ask me that's just a polite way to tell me I have terminal skill issue

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Jun 18, 2023

the whole thing gives manic pixie dream girl vibes, but at the same time, it's like something's off
I'm scared he's going to end up caring too much about the dream world/fantasy and not the real world, and she'll disappear at the worst time
like the whole thing is very fluffy right now but it's like eating cotton candy knowing the stick has spikes in it
hard to describe
anyway, I'm scared for the MC

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:6

Jun 18, 2023

wait, I'm confused, I thought his name was daichi and not daisuke

finallyyyy
looking forward to more scenes irl, maybe the friends developing into more than friends
ok that sounds gay, what I mean is, them getting individual personalities rather than feeling like props

I find it hilarious that she'd be that upset over the crepe though, though I'm still side-eyeing the whole situation. That one news report thing got me paranoid. If the parents are behind this dream thing it'd be SO cruel. This ain't gonna end well. I think. aaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:5

Jun 18, 2023

I kind of want to see more of Haru irl honestly. The dream world thing is nice and all, but it's kind of getting stagnant after so many instances of the same thing. I get that it's (presumably) the way the two leads get to interact, but still.

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:4

Jun 18, 2023

so Haru is the kind of guy that'd go for the blond horni onee-san rather than the redhead tsundere in a harem huh

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:3

Jun 18, 2023

wait, are the parents behind this... omg

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:2

Jun 18, 2023

funnily enough, there's a pink-haired girl that uses an umbrella to fly in a gacha I'm playing rn, I'm legit just picturing Grace as her

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:1

Jun 18, 2023

welp, I figured that would happen
if it helps, she'll leave soon anyway >:P unless

On the Railway Wire

Chapter:9

Jun 18, 2023

hmm, maybe I misread the character... or she lying

On the Railway Wire

Chapter:7

Jun 18, 2023

tetsu's wayward screams being at odds with his seemingly calm personality will never not be amusing

On the Railway Wire

Chapter:6

Jun 18, 2023

To call Yai sus would be an understatement. It makes me wonder if she acted the same way to other people before, the 'ones she ran away from'. Lots of people like this in real life, unfortunately. By the time you've figured them out, they have left and gone for their next victim.

On the Railway Wire

Chapter:4

Jun 18, 2023

like mother like son I suppose, both of them are pretty trusting, letting in a stranger like that

On the Railway Wire

Chapter:3

Jun 18, 2023

oh, well, that's an easygoing mother

Also, how come they're casually referring to each other by their first names? This is set on Japan, right? Guess they just be like that

On the Railway Wire

Chapter:2

Jun 17, 2023

'food, people can't seem to live without it these days'

I mean... yeah...

Massimo's voice is very distinct and mature. He keeps going off tangents, overthinking situations and seems to hide inside his own head a lot (not unlike Rosa), which all makes sense, and gives a sense of charm to the narration. Looking forward to see if/how other characters comment on this.

I must say I agree about the coleslaw/fish thing. I like them both, separated. Together though? NO? how could you write such an atrocity, repent plsnthx

Florentine Dusk

Chapter:1

Jun 17, 2023

felt

To be fair, it did seemed like he found her annoying, or a necessary evil. Kind of hard to explain. Looking forward to see how it'll unfold.

He Who Has Made A Mistake

Chapter:0

Jun 17, 2023

akari gonna get the edward elric treatment at the end, manifesting

Pretty Boy Gangster

Chapter:6

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