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I usually read back as a courtesy but if you're gonna read JUST so I return the favor, heed my warning: I won't.

apparently my writing style is too avant-garde for the weebs or some shit but if you ask me that's just a polite way to tell me I have terminal skill issue

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Sep 02, 2023

I don't give heart reacts often :P this chapter was by far my favorite so far, I think
ayano and keito really contrast him well in their own way, though I've yet to see how that goes for katsumata
so far she seems like she's mostly herself around him, but doesn't sense many starry sky vibes from her so far

ayano kinda reminds me of ami from toradora
this whole chapter really

Tulips by the Lake

Chapter:14

Sep 02, 2023

like kaze said, she'd probably make it big on a different site with stuff like eating tons of ramen
ppl like sharing videos like that around :'D poor girl, and poor guy as well
thankfully this is a Wholesome Romance so it's time to see them heal

Life Stream: Helping a cute girl gain views and followers

Chapter:1

Sep 02, 2023

well that's a disaster waiting to happen

it's honestly cute that katsumata is like that around him, but it'd also be nice for her to do the same around others (which he probably agrees with)

Tulips by the Lake

Chapter:13

Sep 02, 2023

To:LisaLisa

yeah, the deadline won the race (to put it lightly)
I'd written a scene expanding on the asexuality thing, which might ironically have been too racy for the competition, and I write on the HF editor, which sometimes crashes and there's no autosave feature, so I lost that bit anyway

to that and the youji + touma bits, I'd like to go back to once the competition is over x_x

still, I'm glad you liked it
thank you for taking the time to read to the end :D I'd say I also liked your story (a lot) but you already know that so lol

technicolor spiral

Chapter:43

Sep 01, 2023

AAAAA PROGRESS

Lost in Japan

Chapter:32

Sep 01, 2023

bzzz

Telling the Bees

Chapter:18

Sep 01, 2023

To:Manu-chan08

no, not connected
they were meant to be separate entries but I ran out of time :P

title is a WIP

Chapter:3

Sep 01, 2023

i might have skimmed a lil bit,,,

A Boy Showed Up At My Door (Unexpectedly) On a Summer Morning?

Chapter:27

Sep 01, 2023

best last line in the entire competition, bar none

A Boy Showed Up At My Door (Unexpectedly) On a Summer Morning?

Chapter:28

Aug 31, 2023

To:SkeletonIdiot

IT'S NOT A JOJO REFERENCE GDI

technicolor spiral

Chapter:43

Aug 31, 2023

he is an iron flower

NandemOnna

Chapter:15

Aug 31, 2023

I'd been letting chapters pile up before binging so I only read the first couple, but based on that alone, I could tell that shit would've been a very solid entry. Scary, as someone who submitted entries in the same category :P
I'll be looking forward to reading more once you're ready, and until then, I wish you the best, and wish things get better for you soon.

Speak Your Mind!

Chapter:11

Aug 31, 2023

To:Mario Nakano 64

thank you very much for reading :D I really appreciate it!
I'll binge your stuff once I fail to reach the deadline

title is a WIP

Chapter:30

Aug 31, 2023

To:Mario Nakano 64

yes

title is a WIP

Chapter:25

Aug 31, 2023

To:Mario Nakano 64

he did

title is a WIP

Chapter:17

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