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lolitroy

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P.S: I usually read back as a courtesy but if you're gonna read JUST so I return the favor, heed my warning: I won't.

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Jul 30, 2026

was this posted twice...

The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much - Book Cover

The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:7

Jul 30, 2026

lmao wat

Anyway, vincent is already my fave. Tsundere teacher lesgoo

The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much - Book Cover

The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:6

Jul 30, 2026

HAHAHA just when I thought someone would get any kind of dimension aw man

I will say I don't mind the slow pace. It feels standard for a trad novel, but I'm wondering if it might've gotten taken too long to get to like... the inciting incident? Hopefully not? A lot of the stories I've read have taken some time to take off so hopefully that doesn't matter in the grand scheme of things

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The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:5

Jul 30, 2026

I like the prose the most so far. It's genuinely fun to read and full of personality, so I can tell a lot about the main character purely through it. I'm not fond of the one-sentence paragraphs to seem emotional or w/e, but that's more of a me thing. It just kind of falls flat to me when it gets used so constantly.

I get the bullies are the plot device but they're so cartoonish and devoid of humanity, and no, i don't mean as people but characters in a story, that all the scenes involving them feel too out there to take seriously. I can see what they're doing in a vacuum and I'd probably let it slide in another type of story, but the world building and prose are competent enough for them to stand out in a bad way. It's such a Disney trailer way of showing that she's ostracized thay i genuinely think saying "she was bullied" would be more effective. It's done in such a blatantly cliché way that it has made every supposedly emotional scene fall flat to me. She was spiraling for the 4th chapter in a row while I was thinking girll why are you fighting cardboard and losing

The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much - Book Cover

The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:4

Jul 30, 2026

The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much - Book Cover

The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:3

Jul 30, 2026

the bullying scene was hard to take seriously because of how cartoonish it was to the point that it took me out of the story, but tbf that's like 90% in general

The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much - Book Cover

The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:2

Jul 29, 2026

this chapter is poignant commentary on the way the left eats itself

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The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:9

Jul 29, 2026

basil using his basilisk scene better be 10k words long

The Witch and the Basilisk

The Eyes of the Basilisk King

Chapter:21

Jul 29, 2026

wait if she's ded how is her circadian rhythm intact

The Witch and the Basilisk

The Eyes of the Basilisk King

Chapter:20

Jul 29, 2026

that moment when she trauma dumps on the first date

The Witch and the Basilisk

The Eyes of the Basilisk King

Chapter:19

Jul 29, 2026

the kid, several chapters later as the dad tries attacking shoom boy: U... R... THE REAL MONSTER!!!!1

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MONSTERS

Chapter:11

Jul 29, 2026

I too wonder who finds nightgowns comfortable, unless they are fluffy

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MONSTERS

Chapter:10

Jul 29, 2026

To:Moon

just u wait amoral beast,,,

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The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:8

Jul 29, 2026

To:LisaLisa

I'M NEARING 30 AND SELF INSERTING AEHGGGGGGGVVVVVVV
I thought of bumping down her age but I don't like the is a master of the blade at 18 trope so I figured that 30+ would be the sweet spot for that. I tried to make it so that she acts dumb when doing a bit and less dumb otherwise but maybe I have to lower that or maybe it'll even out once there are more non demon king scenes idk

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The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:8

Jul 29, 2026

To:Moon

:nyahaha:

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The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:8