Jan 08, 2025
ok absolute banger from beginning to end
usually this is where I'd leave a chonker comment, but I legitimately don't have many (or any) nitpicks this time around
I had a few minor gripes with your entry last year, but this one's solid all around. The world building and tone complement each other excellently. The events taking place are EXTREMELY out there, and yet, it fits perfectly. I think an overall smaller cast helped rather than hindered the story, with the two main guys having a great, believable relationship, with great chemistry, and personalities that felt realistic (I've unfortunately met Randys irl) yet matched the rest of the story to a T. I can't even tell you what my favorite arc was because they were all hilariously entertaining, but I'll go with the... encounter... with zombies because I'd never gotten so many likes on a comment before >:3
Overall, great fic, 100% deserves the attention it got, and will hopefully continue to get. Truth be told, yours is one of the entries that makes me regret choosing Harmonic Future ahHAhah
