Oct 04, 2024
This was very cute, actually, and I really like how the title relates to the story's message. I guess that if I had to nitpick about something, it'd be how the whole betrayal shtick felt forced in ch5, but that's about it. Certain events could've been elaborated on a bit more, I think, but due to the format this was to be expected. By the end of the story I was pretty invested in the characters, their plight and their relationship. I also liked how pretty much every character acted on what they believed to be right, and how this changed for the better. There's so much edge lately that I'm happy to see something so ultimately hopeful it what I'm saying :3
