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Novelist ✦ Singer and Producer ✦ Isekai Enthusiast ✦ 27/M
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Nov 04, 2024
To:kazesenken
But it’s not Isekai, I swear! Well… not *just* isekai 😂
To:Lucid Levia
No worries! I just didn’t want it to seem like a red herring when you read the next chapter 😆 Although, the magical girl may be making a real-world appearance sooner than later with a lot of hunters sharing that wing 👀
That last bit was the Director greeting Jiro, making it the first time they’ve actually met while Jiro was conscious. 😁 You’ll remember in chapter 1 he saw him during the training video, and in chapter 2 he was floating out of consciousness.
To:Kirb
Archie slander in the chat!?? (I get it though, I wouldn’t want anyone in my head either)
To:Shulox
Life imitates Discord 😂 Thanks for reading, my friend!
Nov 03, 2024
I almost feel tempted to believe that Vermillion has a sort of sixth sense, and the glasses work to suppress that. Your descriptions and pacing were nice too, solid start!
The mystery surrounding Hideo grows… I wonder if he’s connected to someone important within the military 🤔 perhaps next of kin? Shiba certainly doesn’t pull punches either. I could have warned Akai that blackmail was a risk ahaha
To:SkeletonIdiot
If there’s one thing I love it’s robot companions trolling their human counterparts 😆
Fascinating, I see where your timeline branches off now. That’s what I was most excited to see with the alt-history category was how different authors handle the inciting event in time. The butterfly effect allows for infinite possibilities 🦋 but I’m curious how cogsworth actually worked logistically, hope to find out.
She does have major protagonist energy. 🌟
Hoping and praying Jessie doesn’t go rogue 🙏 But I have some faith that Talia will keep him in check. I do feel bad for the factory workers, but there’s been a work day or two that I’ve wished I could fast forward… Things are starting to pick up with the action though, really nice chapter.
To:Akahana
Unhinged is a good way to describe her 😆and I would certainly agree, she provides a nice change of pace for the story’s subject matter.
Nov 02, 2024
I didn’t expect Akai to take his dog up on the offer right away, but I’m looking forward to learning more about Hideo. Also, be proud Akai, Shiba is a fine name 🐕
I don’t watch much magical girl-adjacent media, so I might freestyle with her character a bit. Kururu is a game-obsessed girl at her core. That’s actually really cool about Metaphor, my friends have been trying to get me to play.
The music changes were something I really wanted to incorporate when I started writing this to really give it that game-like feel 🎵 And a good soundtrack is key to a good RPG (in my opinion). Makes me want to make an OST for this book like some of my previous works. As for your theory, you may be onto something…