Feb 01, 2026
What a lovely story, Maid! This ending was so tragic, but in a beautiful way. Everything wrapped up nicely and the good guys get to rest now.
The whole thing really was a good read. I loved the kindness of Annie, and the brashness of Lilin. Their personalities contrasted, like a rebellious daughter and patient mother, and that made the impact of the end even more emotional. I think it was fun watching Lilin slowly mellow as the chapters progressed.
The Demon King was crazy good too. He had such an imposing presence all of the time, even when he wasn't around, even to the very end. Part of me was expecting him to be redeemed, but I really appreciate that you made him into the 𝘚𝘖𝘉 he was, laughing as he spited his daughter one more time. We just need more A-hole villains like him now-a-days lol
And honestly, if you continued the story, I always got the vibe that I wanted more. What I mean is that I knew what was coming with Grannie, and how she was going to sacrifice herself, but I still felt there was more story to be told. So definitely consider the idea of continuing this, if you get the inspiration.
Anyways, I'm happy I got to the end! This was great, and I look forward to more stories from you in the future!
Best wishes to you, Maid!👍