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Taylor J

Hello! My name is Taylor! I am a writer and artist. One day I want to work in the video game and light novel industry and make epic stories for all of you to enjoy!

My aim is to improve a little bit every day, so please feel free to critique my work as much as you’d like! (I can take it)
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Current Novels :
1. The Pill That Killed Romance (hiatus until after MALxHF)
2. Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel
3. Control My Life!

Upcoming Novels :

1. Apocalypse Punk Pt. 2

registered at: Feb 05, 2023

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Aug 21, 2025

That redemption! GOOD FOR HIM!!! 🤗 Too bad it was short lived...😭 Definitely looking forward to this crazy character though!

Error Code 404: My Class Is Corrupted, so I’m Breaking All the Rules

Chapter:8

Aug 21, 2025

To:Mai

She gets the Honeyfeed Wife of the Year award! 🌹👩🏆

Control My Life!

Chapter:4

Aug 21, 2025

To:Moe Tie

-And by accepting these terms, you hereby sell your soul to our corporation and spend the rest of your days in a dungeon playing this game.-

"Yeah, okay. I just want to start the game already."

Control My Life!

Chapter:15

Aug 21, 2025

To:Lucid Levia

Stealth is never my strong suit in games, so I rarely go that route. I think the lockpick game in skyrim is kinda easy though compared to others.

ZORRO FTW!!!

Control My Life!

Chapter:17

Aug 21, 2025

To:Moe Tie

Never fear, Zorro is here! And hopefully he charged his controllers! 🎮

Control My Life!

Chapter:14

Aug 21, 2025

To:Lucid Levia

The Virus is truly a mysterious force! And a powerful one if he has some friends 😱

Control My Life!

Chapter:16

Aug 21, 2025

To:Mai

Thank you so much!!! Glad you like it!

Control My Life!

Chapter:2

Aug 20, 2025

Alright, there are no words I can say to tell you how much I liked this book. This short story really captivated me, and it's rare for something to catch my attention so well that I actually want to read it through in one go. That's the point of a short story I suppose, but this one just hit a little different.

I'll say it again, I think the message here was really inspiring. The idea that the magnum opus isn't found in perfection or practice, but rather in the process of pouring out the heart, is just beautiful. I think that Joris learning that at the end felt very right, and I like the little splash of humor where he just kinda' plays with the violine like a child.

As for the format of each chapter, the best way I have to describe it is going up a hill. The first chapter is the climbing action that sets your expectations high. The second was the peak where we see the best view of the whole world in every direction. While the third was the walk back down where we mulch over what we learned. I think the second chapter definitely feels special, so yes, I will unironically call it "Peak."

Anyways, I think I've made my point, so that's all from me for now. Very nice work on this!

Joris's Afterstory

Chapter:3

Aug 20, 2025

Orionless, I'm almost in tears right now. The book's start was promising, but this chapter really outdid my expectations. It was one of the best I'd read this whole year, and I've read a lot. Not only was the message inspiring to me personally, but it felt vivid and, ironically, genuine.

I could picture this washed up, retired Beethoven figure sitting there in that chamber, dying while he watched the next generation take over and finding comfort in one girl with little talent of her own, but a story to tell through her music.

I probably sound dramatic, but it really made me feel something and I had to let it out. Very nice work! TYFTC!

Joris's Afterstory

Chapter:2

Aug 20, 2025

This was such a strong start! I wonder if he'll be inspired by the girl's performance when he hears her play. I'm betting he will!

Joris's Afterstory

Chapter:1

Aug 19, 2025

To:Mai

They've healed up great! 🧑‍⚕️

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:1

Aug 19, 2025

Was that an author self-camo I saw in there? 👀

Our Town in another world

Chapter:3

Aug 19, 2025

Evil wombats, they are! crikey, I've neva' seen one this ornery. Mah gosh, I think the lil' bugga' is chargin' his laza'!

Our Town in another world

Chapter:2

Aug 18, 2025

The line had to be drawn somewhere. he can flash her, oogle her panties, almost trick her into a kiss... But when he says her real name, that's when things get real.

Magical Mai: Tales Of The Clumsy Magical Girl

Chapter:7

Aug 18, 2025

The traditional after bath milk!🥛

-The Building of The Brick Hero-

OOOO FRACK!!! THE DAGGER ENDED UP THERE!?!?! CRAAAAPPPP!!!😩

Ren X: Last Arrival In Another World

Chapter:5

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