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Taylor J

Hello! My name is Taylor! I am a writer and artist. One day I want to work in the video game and light novel industry and make epic stories for all of you to enjoy!

My aim is to improve a little bit every day, so please feel free to critique my work as much as you’d like! (I can take it)
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Current Novels :
1. The Pill That Killed Romance (hiatus until after MALxHF)
2. Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel
3. Control My Life!

Upcoming Novels :

1. Apocalypse Punk Pt. 2

registered at: Feb 05, 2023

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Oct 25, 2025

A festival! Thank goodness everyone gets to enjoy it

Kingdoms of Sin: The Hero Is Dead

Chapter:47

Oct 24, 2025

Resetting the town is a freaky thought... That's a crazy way to make sure there aren't any threats there.

Those rewrite storms remind me of my brainstorming phase before creating a new story. Things change so quickly and are hardly recognizable before the first draft. We're all writers so you know the struggle lol

The Last Revision

Chapter:12

Oct 24, 2025

This battle just keeps getting more intense! The stakes are rising!

Kingdoms of Sin: The Hero Is Dead

Chapter:46

Oct 24, 2025

GAAAHH NOOO! GET OUT OF THAT SLUDGE! THAT"S IT! GET THE DISH SOAP BECAUE WE HAVE TO CLEAN THAT CRAP UP AND SAVE THEM! 😭😭😭

Kingdoms of Sin: The Hero Is Dead

Chapter:45

Oct 24, 2025

The struggle between Beluacor and Tyffeon was strong, and deep... It really showed how strong Tyffeon has become.

Kingdoms of Sin: The Hero Is Dead

Chapter:44

Oct 24, 2025

The crimson cloaked guy stomping in and just being like "Name" was so BA. Very cool moment, but intense too! I can tell he's definitely strong!

Children of Mother Moon

Chapter:2

Oct 23, 2025

Oh, wait... Never mind! That was the last chapter! 😭

Well, I'll give my thoughts on this story as it is. So, I really liked how you broke a lot of tradition with this. The characters kinda' just said "F this prophecy! Let's go do something else!" I found the simplicity of that very fun and character driven.

As such, the characters were amazing. Aggie was chill and confident, the perfect counter/complement to the hot head that was Akari. Both of them meshed really well on their journey to kinda' do their own thing while collecting those remnants of Aggie's power was a lot of fun.

Also, If I may be honest for a moment, I think that Akari's design on the cover is very attractive and cool I normally wouldn't point that out, since I'm not one to thirst over characters or anything. But she reminded me of a beloved DND character I made a few years back, so I really appreciate that look a lot.

Anyways, I'm going to hold off on doing a full review right now because this ending really leaves me craving more. I was kinda' hoping the story would get wrapped up in the twenty chapters and just be a healthy short story, but even so I was pulled in really well by the characters and hope to see more someday. If you end up writing more of this, I'll definitely check it out!

The Manic Mage and the Would-Be Demon Lord

Chapter:19

Oct 23, 2025

So, Aggie and his sibling had to battle royal it out for the strongest. His older brother sounds like an absolute prick, so I look forward to seeing them beat him down.

Since there's only one chapter left, I'm curious to see if you're going to wrap up the whole story here, or just one arc. Very curious!

The Manic Mage and the Would-Be Demon Lord

Chapter:19

Oct 23, 2025

I can feel the absolute seething anger she must have felt at that last confession lol

Kitty Section

Chapter:1

Oct 22, 2025

To:SkeletonIdiot

It's been a long time since I've seen Digimon, so I looked up that scene. Hopefully Ray does not hatch out of an egg 😆, but that would be just his luck.

Control My Life!

Chapter:33

Oct 22, 2025

To:Lucid Levia

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Control My Life!

Chapter:31

Oct 22, 2025

To:SkeletonIdiot

Crow doin his job, I see! Enjoy your Switzerland water! 😆

(I had the funniest joke written out, but then HF ate my comment because it had cross out text, so it's kinda lost forever 🤣)

Control My Life!

Chapter:31

Oct 22, 2025

To:Katsuhito

I'm actually a little glad that Malwaria's name tricks a few people 🤭

I'm 30% sure that I accidentally had her name auto corrected to Malaria somewhere, but at this point I'm too afraid to look. You have no idea the uphill battle it was to get my program to recognize her name lol

Control My Life!

Chapter:31

Oct 22, 2025

To:Sammi9519

The one where she was like -How clumsy of me (=~=)- or however the face went, that face was a real pain in the butt that I almost couldn't get and I was fuming to make it work. it had some hidden thing in it that made it impossible to save. Something about one of the symbols not being supported here, so I had to alter it until it actually would save. I was so glad when I got it to work! There were a few times where that issue really made me think lol

Control My Life!

Chapter:30

Oct 22, 2025

To:Sammi9519

ROSE IS SPEEGY! = \ ( >_<)J

Control My Life!

Chapter:29

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