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Jul 14, 2023

Yeah, there we go, there's Jessica, this was a nice change of pace. :)

But whoa there....Keith showing off his inexperience! What is he saying to Jessica hahahahaha, you can't say those things!!!

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Chapter:17

Jul 14, 2023

I still find it super hilarious that Keith can just tell right off the bat how tall people are.

I think what's kind of a shame is you do kind of miss out on opportunities during like the ending scene here to have a moment to build a relationship with Keith and Jessica. I feel like she's been absent and we've only seen her maybe 2-3 times in 16 chapters. I think maybe reworking where she is in the plot could be helpful to reminding us that she's around. :(

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Chapter:16

Jul 14, 2023

This has become a slice of life anime.

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Chapter:14

Jul 14, 2023

I never sprinted to class. If I was late, I just walked in late....what's the hurry you're just a freshman...

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Chapter:13

Jul 14, 2023

Jessica seems real down to earth. Ugh, it's just a shame that their interactions so far are basically all over text!!!

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Chapter:12

Jul 14, 2023

I thought the dad was about to hand the beatdown to Keith but actually it's the mom that runs this household...

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Chapter:11

Jul 14, 2023

I can't wait for Keith to start chatting with her again too....it feels like it's been a good maybe 5-6 chapters since they last spoke and all of Keith's interactions have just been in his head haha

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Chapter:10

Jul 14, 2023

Kinda impressive that Keith can just tell what heights the characters are just at a glance hahaha, I'm terrible at that.

Kinda curious that he kept referring to Sean as senior though, I never did that in school.....is this in the US?

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Chapter:9

Jul 14, 2023

Hahaha, brudda....

I think the narration of the monologue could've been a bit less melodramatic, but again, I like the idea behind it. I wish there was more interaction with a couple of the other characters but I'm sure we'll see that later. :)

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Chapter:8

Jul 14, 2023

Whoa whoa whoa, that's a little harsh of Keith. I think that spiral could have been paced a bit better, but I do like the arc of him realizing that he had perhaps been a bit overconfident and naive.

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Chapter:7

Jul 14, 2023

I think there are times where I feel like you're thinking too much of sticking to the prompt, I felt like the lines where Keith was thinking about Jessica felt a little out of place, almost to remind us that she existed in the story. It's fine if we just stick to basketball for now. :) Keep us focused!

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Chapter:6

Jul 14, 2023

Power Forward really got my BL senses tingling to be honest....I love a good bromance between Keith and Carlos! <3 <3 <3

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Chapter:5

Jul 14, 2023

Nice! We need more men who have a nose for BL!!!! Wonder if Megu is doing this for Kasumi's safety or whether he's envious that Kasumi spends so much time with someone else...

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Chapter:22

Jul 14, 2023

The overaction by Keith hahaha, they just got to know each other, it's too soon to even be good friends yet! Take it slowly Keith. :)

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Chapter:4

Jul 14, 2023

I find it kind of funny that she was so receptive to learning about basketball, I feel like I would've tuned out so quickly to someone blabbering at me the first time we met haha

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Chapter:3

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