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Jul 14, 2023

Hahaha, brudda....

I think the narration of the monologue could've been a bit less melodramatic, but again, I like the idea behind it. I wish there was more interaction with a couple of the other characters but I'm sure we'll see that later. :)

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:8

Jul 14, 2023

Whoa whoa whoa, that's a little harsh of Keith. I think that spiral could have been paced a bit better, but I do like the arc of him realizing that he had perhaps been a bit overconfident and naive.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:7

Jul 14, 2023

I think there are times where I feel like you're thinking too much of sticking to the prompt, I felt like the lines where Keith was thinking about Jessica felt a little out of place, almost to remind us that she existed in the story. It's fine if we just stick to basketball for now. :) Keep us focused!

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:6

Jul 14, 2023

Power Forward really got my BL senses tingling to be honest....I love a good bromance between Keith and Carlos! <3 <3 <3

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:5

Jul 14, 2023

Nice! We need more men who have a nose for BL!!!! Wonder if Megu is doing this for Kasumi's safety or whether he's envious that Kasumi spends so much time with someone else...

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:22

Jul 14, 2023

The overaction by Keith hahaha, they just got to know each other, it's too soon to even be good friends yet! Take it slowly Keith. :)

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:4

Jul 14, 2023

I find it kind of funny that she was so receptive to learning about basketball, I feel like I would've tuned out so quickly to someone blabbering at me the first time we met haha

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:3

Jul 14, 2023

Childhood bonds over Yugioh are the best! <3

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:2

Jul 13, 2023

Oh no! I had a friend who lost a cat this way and it's just super devastating.....what if Michi is the cat in the title though?!?!!!! 🤔🤔🤔

Aiko with the cute joke to break the silence, he's such a sweetie...

Ailurophobia

Chapter:13

Jul 13, 2023

Maybe the parents are okay with Nao and Takashi kissing...

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:24

Jul 13, 2023

To:minatika

I'm sorry! I wish I could write it, but you can just imagine it on your own time!!!! <3

Wen I wrote this I actually realized I hadn't written a dress up scene in the story yet, which is such a shame I could've done much more with it.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:26

Jul 13, 2023

To:Kitsune

Palpatine is probably still a frog. 🐸

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:26

Jul 13, 2023

This ends another arc, and here is another moment where I considered ending the story. However, I felt like a few threads still remained unresolved that needed closure, and so the last six chapters of this story are devoted to concluding some of the threads that have been hinted at throughout the story thus far.

Thanks for all the readers that have read this story. Your commentary and thoughts are always very much appreciated.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:26

Jul 12, 2023

To:minatika

Yeah, I think my favorite moment maybe in this entire story up until now was writing "Nope. No, no, no." Obviously she's not real, but I feel like Diane is speaking not just to Kyle but also to me, as if she's saying something like "can you please stop with the stupid jokes and let them kiss already?"

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:25

Jul 12, 2023

Oh no, maybe Chiyo used too much magic and it's leeching her life force. D:

Wonder what Oliver is gonna do with the crowns...maybe use them as leverage to figure out what the heck are Elegast's reasons for doing what he's doing.

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:19

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