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Jul 10, 2023
To:Kitsune
I originally wanted to add more hints earlier in the book, but I decided to leave them ambiguous since Vladimir was never the main character anyway.
And yeah, I was deciding at first between someone a bit more nuanced but I felt like Cynthia's brand of hatred is already so repulsive that it made no sense trying to make her anything but evil.
That period between "per boob" is perfectly placed. I like the eroticism of this story, it's like perfect for a story from the male gaze.
Really liking Fumiko's reactions during the speed date. She's surprisingly sensitive in spite of how she expresses her inability to feel "tingly" emotions.
Best of luck on the rewrite!
Awwww Akari's past! D: Well, at least he's surrounded by better people now.
Aaaahhhh, I love it when I'm offered jackets in the cold. Yes, it's bad for the other person but the thought is actually too sweet.
When the dad gave all those gifts, I remembered this scene from...I think it was Inception where one of the characters told the main character that it was going to take a lot more than stuffed animals to remind the children that they still had a father. Poor Yorito.
Get well soon!
"I'm just helping her get back home."
How are you doing that Tetsu? What are you doing Tetsu? Away from home? Which makes you what Tetsu? Which makes you WHAT Tetsu?
This old man needs to teach the young uns how to behave!
Tetsu really needs to sort out these emotions, "simple courtesy?" I think he's done A LOT more than just simple courtesy imho
Yai's language is really manipulative. There's something just so unsettling about it that remind me of how people have tried to make me feel like I needed them to escape some kind of nihilist loneliness. I don't know about this Tetsu...
Man, Yai really doesn't want to go home alone. I wonder if there's something deeper than just....being alone? I imagine they could probably still do something long distance...
Ooooh it's the elopement arc.
What is it with guys and thinking that the best way to treat a girl who's been rejected it is to confess? 🙄Come on Tetsu!!!
Ooooooh, yeah Yamada seems like a much better fit. But honestly....man I don't know if it's a good idea for Tetsu to recommend asking her out so soon, at least give her some space. :/