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Christian Widjaya

A passionate game enthusiast who like to design game concepts, and story-writing at the same time. Loves writing engaging stories or serious, slow and interconnecting stories. For hire.

registered at: May 28, 2023

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Jul 28, 2023

To:minatika

Well, chat> eating. Oof, he missed her that much 😂

Walking her at night, they didn't realize that they are actually doing dating stuff unconsciously.😂

Yeh. It's something that she probably struggle at. We could only wait to find out.

And why Tony protected him, is in chapter 26.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:25

Jul 28, 2023

Good Game, Girl!

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Chapter:18

Jul 28, 2023

Final FINAL Brawl 😂

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Chapter:17

Jul 28, 2023

Three already in a row. Okay, I'm already know 😂

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Chapter:15

Jul 28, 2023

What the hell 😂
"I hate you so I'm gonna punch you!"

Isn't it supposed to be:
Punch!
"Why you do that?"
"Cuz I hate you! "
But anyways, it was funny.

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Chapter:14

Jul 28, 2023

Wow, this one is funny, but I was getting off again in the start. Last chapter was about bathroom at the last scene, suddenly, we got with a... bedtime? Idk. I'm sure you know your story better than myself. Still, this last sentence made me laughed for a while. Good work.

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Chapter:13

Jul 28, 2023

I felt the last sentence is somewhat off-putting. We looked at the bathroom door, then what? I think you could give us a context. Maybe it's me who just dumb, but I don't get what I supposed to think with the last one.

But still, I liked that your characters had something to do and had their struggles, not just some carefree or perfect guy that blast things through. I'm looking forward to next chapters.

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Chapter:12

Jul 28, 2023

There's nothing wrong with childish dream, and neither a person is always a good person. Hypocrites? We sometimes do that out without knowing so. He didn't need to be so down.

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Chapter:11

Jul 28, 2023

Hero is a relative being. Even a thief like robin hood marked as a hero by stealing from nobles, even if stealing is an illegal thing to do.

You don't need to be a hero to do things right 🙂

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Chapter:10

Jul 28, 2023

Poof, a kiss 😍 .

Now I wonder how he would react.

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Chapter:8

Jul 28, 2023

To:Geta

Yeah, now we all know why he acted like a douchebag 😂

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:26

Jul 28, 2023

To:Lihinel

Brotherhood😎

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:26

Jul 28, 2023

To:Geta

As my earlier comment indicates, read chapter 26 to find out 🙂

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:25

Jul 28, 2023

To:Geta

Yeah. Keith was the star of his highschool basketball team, yet he didn't manage to get himself into the active roster.

It's a division one university which is the highest tier in the U.S. From division one, division two and division three. If anyone could win NCAA or getting scouted into NBAs then it will be one of those D1s. No named team be like: ouch

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:24

Jul 28, 2023

Recycle bin out of his head. Why I felt of windows xp all over?

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:30

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