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I've decided that now is the time to write my first story. Above all, let's have fun on this journey!
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Jun 16, 2023
To:Peace Sign
I wish for the same. 🙏
I can immediately visualise him dancing in his bed, falling off, and rolling under it 😂
To:Shulox
Thank you for the support! The romance aspect is certainly something I'll need to introduce sooner when I come back to these earlier chapters at some point. If you're looking for romance, you might enjoy the upcoming arc 😉
You can mention it as many times as you want! Chiyo is the most fun to write as well.
It is a reference to Kino no Tabi! Glad you caught it. Expect Chiyo to get a lot more unfiltered in the next chapters.
If they could visit together that would be really nice! Let's see what fate has in store for them.
To:Lucky Lane
Yes, she's originally from Aomori, Japan.
Akane sounds like a character with a lot of interesting things about her that can be deeply explored in future chapters. I'm curious to see where you take this!
Jun 15, 2023
To:Harmonica Writes
Hi, his is really good advice! Thank you for reading everything that's out so far. I'm also aware that I've not introduced enough romance elements so far, which I'll definitely need to come back to. Raised stakes is definitely something that we will see in the upcoming arc. But first there will be a little buildup with some more bonding before the arc really kicks into a higher gear.
To:Dissartist
We love badass old people in here.
The diary is an interesting storytelling method. It's nice to see that you're introducing a lot of elements early.
How has this been up for 2 weeks yet have I not caught this...
Grandma new best girl tbh. 🐐
Best girl makes her appearance!
The prologue was hooking but confusing at first because of the "mother killer" thing yet I still enjoyed it. But now, you've gone and turned this prologue into a straight up masterpiece. There's nothing here for me to criticize, only felt pure bliss going through this chapter, and that's not hyperbole.
