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I've decided that now is the time to write my first story. Above all, let's have fun on this journey!
What is an Achievement?
Jun 15, 2023
Best girl makes her appearance!
The prologue was hooking but confusing at first because of the "mother killer" thing yet I still enjoyed it. But now, you've gone and turned this prologue into a straight up masterpiece. There's nothing here for me to criticize, only felt pure bliss going through this chapter, and that's not hyperbole.
Jun 14, 2023
To:Kitsune
For a little kid to be all alone by a remote lake, without knowing where he's from is suspicious. Especially if that kid claims to come there all the time. But on it's own that's not enough to suspect someone of being non-human. The main reason for the narrating Oliver of the future to suspect that the boy wasn't human I can't tell you yet: it would mean spoiling a future chapter. For his exact identity, I prefer to leave it up to the reader's imagination!
It's really cute how Haru is willing to go to such length just so Grace can enjoy sugary sweetness.
Those basketball team names look strangely familiar.....I must be imagining things. 🤔
To:Christian Widjaya
Oliver is not a pervert, but I'm sure he didn't mind it either.
Love the way you described the shrine, I could easily visualize it. Looks like Takashi's dreams and reality are becoming interwoven 😱
Jun 13, 2023
It's Betsy!
To:ryba
I don't want either of them to be useless in battle. They both have their skills!
To:otkrlj
She's from the beautiful planet of Aomori! Not to be confused with Aomori, Japan.
She has a bit of a manic streak just like a certain creator of hers.
Jun 12, 2023
I was going for some ridiculous spell name only an anime nerd would think of 😆
Nice imagery with him being pulled underwater, really puts you into his headspace.
To:Lucky Lane
I'm glad you are enjoying it!
Jun 11, 2023
The interactions with Nao were really cute.
