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I've decided that now is the time to write my first story. Above all, let's have fun on this journey!
What is an Achievement?
Jun 08, 2023
To:Steward McOy
That's a good point! I'll have to expand on that in an earlier chapter.
Jun 07, 2023
I swear it will get wholesome now that the setup is out of the way!
The possibilities in Reverie seem endless! I noticed a typo in the sentence "Rowan, tell him about you aspect".
To:ryba
Aomori is definitely on my bucket list, hope I've sparked your interest in it as well.
To:HVM
Thanks for the tip! I've added an extra empty line.
To:A. Hoshino
These two chapters I've just read are already a big improvement over what I read in the beginning. There are more line breaks, the dialogue flows smoothly, the descriptions are relevant, etc. For now I don't have any real critiques.
And he's already redeemed himself! You love to see it. These past few chapters have hooked me, looking forward to the continuation.
I'm liking this dynamic, I hope the boy pulls himself together sooner or later. Love the new cover art by the way!
I keep thinking of Ya Boy Kongming while reading this.
That "I hate you as well" had me in stitches. Love the comedy in this so far!
I love how the style of narration matches the protagonist's way of speaking. At first I thought that was just the way you write. 😅
Thank you for the continued support! Alicia is definitely not to be messed with, and Oliver's perception of her doesn't help either.
Kiyoshi is her WHAT? Nice cliffhanger!
That was quite a strong reaction to not getting any Valentine's chocolate!
They fell asleep together, in the same bed, on the first day?? This chapter already has more romantic developments than I have planned for the whole novel 😆
