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I've decided that now is the time to write my first story. Above all, let's have fun on this journey!
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Aug 07, 2023
Beside a confusing lack of dialogue tags near the end and overuse of "their" at some points this was a very solid chapter. I'm in love with your descriptions.
To:Shulox
Aldo's role in the story grew far beyond what I initially had planned for him, and I kind of love that. Now it's onward to new adventures (after a certain defining moment 👀)
This feels like a poem. I'm sure I'll need to pause on every other line to let their meaning soak through in coming chapters if this prologue is anything to go by. It's been a while since I read such a poetic and meaning-laden style, keep it up!
Aug 06, 2023
To:lolitroy
ok
Aug 05, 2023
I just got pinged with 4 notifications after 20 days of radio silence. I was so scared you'd given up on this novel! Keep chugging on to the very end, I'm rooting for you. I'm busy with catching up on reads but your novel is coming up soon on my to-read list.
To:Kitsune
This chapter was indeed a pain to write. Fight scenes don't write themselves, that's for sure.
This is your best chapter yet. I'm glad I started reading your work!
To:Lihinel
The power of love is a strong force indeed!
Sweetness overload! I'll need to get my sugar levels checked
Aug 04, 2023
Love the easter egg you put in this one. Very sweet and fun chapter overall.
To:kazesenken
Third time's the charm? 🤔
Takashi finally has his moment, a lot of buildup went into this and its so worth it!
Once again you're making me care about a game of football, good job! I loved seeing how different the atmosphere in the team is compared to the previous game. They have the power of love and friendship on their side, but will it be enough?
Verus tossing his robes aside was definitely an intentional reference 😆
Cursed swords deserve some love! They're cool and lethal (to their user)
And finally, more hat fanservice to come!
Aug 03, 2023
The team is ready for their next match, with their bonds closer than ever!
