Jul 19, 2023

Oh shoot Selphine is literally hooked on the adrenaline of fighting 😭 because it's the only rush she can get here in the Void. Honestly I'm surprised this world lasted as long as it did, without more people going mad and indulging in violence or gambling or just...anything to feel alive. (But I guess for the people who don't realize the truth of the "Void" maybe they just become a part of it, and basically turn into NPCs without realizing.)

It was looking like this fight might continue till one of them ran out of magic, but captives change things! Arthur and Jack have to act fast now 😨

Oh wait woah did Arthur transfer Jack to another body?! I wasn't expecting that!! Is Jack in Louise's mind now?! Will he get to see her memories? Or Maria's?

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Jul 19, 2023

Merling-chan gets her extra sweet pie!!! :D she is just having the best time with all these treats! Now if only our hero could share in some of that happiness... (But I feel like his past memories might prevent him from enjoying cafe-like sweets 😖)

Merling-chan spinning around in a straw hat might be one of the cutest images in this story so far 💕💕 (okay, I'll admit, I am still a fan of both merlings AND sun hats, so I am biased 🥰)

Oh we get to see the play!! An artist and a swordsmith -- working together to create a dream sword, and then slowly falling in love as they do so. It is a cute story, but is our hero thinking of someone else while watching it? Maybe his feelings for his adorable companion? ❤️

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Jul 19, 2023

Oh woah 😨 Kazuma's family is trying to arrange his marriage? I suddenly understand now why he feels so trapped. He barely has any say in his life!

Wait!!! Wait it's really Rika?! :D She's an ojou-chan?? (Rika has 10 rejections??? 😭😭 Nooo she's so precious! Those boys don't realize what they're missing!)

But a fake arrangement might work! 😁 They could date on a trail basis for a month. Just to become better at romance, of course! Not because I'm hoping for them to fall in love or anything, b-baka 😉

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Jul 19, 2023

A nice little hike for a respite! I love all the descriptions of the trail, the trees, the stream...it was just so relaxing and I could see it so clearly in my mind!!

And it's nice to see that Layn's training is paying off, even if only by making himself *think* he's stronger, he *is* slowly becoming stronger! He might just outlast Lucia on this hike 😁

Curious now as to where this hike will take them! Might they get a little closer personally? :D might they discover a miasma enemy? 🤭 (Okay guessing probably not that last one, they seem like they're in a fairly safe area!)

I hope you enjoyed your break!! ❤️ Did the time off give you any new writing ideas? 🤩

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Jul 19, 2023

To:Funsui

To tell you the truth I have a little bit of a cold today too!! So I wanted to draw something small and fun and Yada-chan was just the thing ❤️ she and baba and Ru are just the perfect little cheer-up crew!!! I'm so glad it could make your day better 🥰 I definitely wanted to share the cheer your Toren drawing brought me, and it sounds like my plan worked >:) hehehe!! (Yes my evil little plans to spread joy! 🤣)

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Jul 19, 2023

I feel like for the first time we're really seeing Mai's true feelings. She wanted to win, and she's really frustrated that she didn't! There's no more grandstanding anymore, she's just being genuine with Ryota 💕

And now...it might finally be date time?! Maybe?? Finally?! :DDD YES?! ❤️

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Jul 19, 2023

I'm so excited to finally see Jessica drawing!!! With art skills like that, she would definitely be accepted into an arts school 😁

Oooh the gossiping girls might be Brandon's admirers? That's interesting 🤔 wouldn't they be glad then that Jessica is dating Keith, and not Brandon? (Oh but maybe they didn't know who Jessica was dating in particular. That makes sense.)

Tony scaring off those girls made me like him much better 🤣 but maybe not for those lewd gestures hahaha! I'd probably be running off too! But I wonder what Sean's parents do that he has to help out with so much? 🤔 Curious about the team!! Excited to learn more about them soon :D

Also so glad their plan worked!! Jessica is now Basketball Girl 🏀 ! But hmm Keith keeps forgetting to say something to her...there's all these little hints 🧐 I will keep looking and wondering! 🤣

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Jul 19, 2023

Jace's room is full of...Books!! Okay somehow that is adorable 💕 it makes me like him even more. (Romance books, hmm? 😏 I was almost expecting to find a few naughty magazines in there hehe!)

I mean, Momoka, even if he's cursed how can you turn down perfection? 😍 The boy likes romance novels!!! He's an absolute keeper for that alone! (The looks are a bonus 🤭)

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Jul 19, 2023

Haru is good at soccer, can shred at guitar, is super rich, he's getting homemade bentos from his girlfriend....wait a minute... 🤔🤔🤔 He's actually really cool!!! 😭 Haru popularity arc?

Also cooking episode! Excited!! :D ...but hmm this means Kasumi will have a knife 🤭

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Jul 19, 2023

KBO is....closed!! (˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )

Now Hanako needs to find a new place to practice her singing!! (But hey, it led to a coffee date, so it wasn't all bad 💕)

Hmm curious why Hanako likes to stay out so late (still worried about her family life 🥺) but now Daiki is really starting to think about her more seriously 😁

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Jul 19, 2023

Okay sorry I haven't been able to comment as much!! 😖 I am trying to keep up with so many stories that I've had to comment a little less (but I regret nothing 🤣 I will continue to read ALL THE BOOKS)

BUT OH MY GOSH HE FINALLY FIGURED OUT THE LOVE WORD!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ The brother knew so long ago too that he had a bet on it 😭 ahahaha!
The brother is giving him the Real Talk 😏 as a good big bro should!
Now for the hardest part though: telling her how he feels!! It might seem easy knowing that Ichigo likes him back, but it's still absolutely nerve wracking 💕💕

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Jul 19, 2023

To:Touya

A little bit of politics to help explain the situation from the father's side of things! I wish I had more time to explore into the world-building of Farelle (their government, their laws, how the justice system is handled) because like you said, their politics can be a bit rudimentary (but it's mostly due to corruption -- as in, the Dukes can pay to have Mister Faralind be framed for the murder, because they have the money. So knowing that might happen, the dad decided to poison the plants instead.) But I can't really go THAT far into the world because... 🤣 how do I put it? If I start doing a little world building, that can raise more questions (who are these dukes? why is corruption okay? are there no laws in place to protect the people?) and I cannot answer those in the scope of this story. So it sadly will have to be a little bit of a handwave on some of these more political parts 😅 but hopefully I'll be able to give just enough details that it feels acceptable, if not 100% realistic!

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Jul 19, 2023

Yeah, in the original version, I had Jun accuse Claire of attacking the plants...because for all Jun knows, Claire has a ton of magic, and could easily cause this kind of problem. Which, while that made sense logically (magical-looking attack --> probably done by magical witch?) it made Jun look like a total idiot 🤦‍♂️ considering everything Claire's done for him at this point. So it was way better to reign it in to what you read now!! :D And I'm glad you liked how it turned out! (Since you didn't read the previous version, I know you've got a fresh perspective on this c: so it's nice to hear it works!)

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Jul 19, 2023

To:Touya

The "Could it be that you're...a woman?" line was added last minute 🤣 I was originally going to have Toren realize Roki was an elf. Then. I sat there looking at the script and went "Naaaaahhh" and made poor Toren lose -10 intelligence points, but gain +10 Absolute Comedy Charisma points. Toren is a precious boy and I love him so much 😆

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Jul 19, 2023

"Hi I'm Kazou. You can call me Kazou" this boy is exactly my kind of awkward, and this line made me love him that much more 😆

But hey we also learned that Suma is a manga fan!! :D maybe they can have fun discussing this?

And I don't mind Kazou being the literal protagonist, while Toyo might be more the "Main Character" archetype. I feel like that still makes sense with your title 👍 but I'd be excited to learn more about Toyo too.

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