Jul 01, 2023
Okay I'm caught up with your uploads!! I'm enjoying it so far, and it really has this high fantasy adventure vibe to it all!
I liked that in this chapter we got to know a bit more about Neteth and his ideals, as well as the conflict with Asphodel.
Personally I'm hoping to get to know more about these characters!! I feel like so far, there's been so much action going on, 11 chapters in and I still don't really know any of our main cast all that well. (Other than that Tex is amazing 🤩 but that's just because I find his antics hilarious 🤣 I still know nothing about him other than "Texas")
I'm also a little confused as to the direction of their journey? Maybe this is just me being a bit slow 😂 Chapter 1 felt like a mysterious prologue. Chapter 2 we meet Neteth as he's out hunting, and he gets attacked by bandits. Then we meet Tex & Asphodel sort of by chance. They beat the bandits, head back to the castle, and then....the prince just kind of runs away with these two strangers on an adventure to the realm of the gods? I feel like I need a bit of clarity as to everything that's happening? 🙏 but if that's just me misinterpreting things, please let me know! I think your story has a lot of potential and I'd love to see it get even stronger.
