Aug 14, 2023

That couple photo 👀 girls definitely don't just take selfies with guys for no reason. Hehe ❤️

Oh man the Japanese restaurant though 🤣 I shouldn't read when I haven't had dinner yet. Might have to see if I can buy the ingredients to make my own sushi. (Thankfully one grocery store nearby sells pot stickers/gyoza 🥟)
Curious if they were praying for the food like "itadakimasu" because they know the Japanese tradition? 🤔 Or if you were going for more of a Christian food prayer there?

Ahahaha Jessica is playing with him with the food 😉 okay, Jessica has to be aware she's got a crush on him!

Ice cream!! There is always a second stomach for desserts 😌 always. I'm glad Keith got a bite too!

"Great friend" 💔 Jessica noooo 😭 nooo. Nooooooooo. Maybe she hasn't realized her own feelings yet?
Because if I was Jessica's friend, and she told me she went out with a guy on a date like this only to friend-zone him, I'd totally be upset with her 🤣 but I will give her time!!

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Aug 14, 2023

To:ChronoSigma

Definitely trying to discuss the concepts of having "tunnel vision" in a romantic relationship, and also about weighing what it means to respect your partner's desires vs your own. But you're right, if Jun just does everything Mia wants, all he's done is repeated his last relationship but in reverse 😭 so things will have to change here!

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Aug 14, 2023

To:ChronoSigma

You know I didn't think about that 🤔 he probably just shared generic stories that he could add "...but definitely in an elf forest" at the end or something 😂 but I might want to tweak that line now that you mention it. 👍 Thanks for pointing that out!

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Aug 14, 2023

To:ChronoSigma

Love Pokedex omg. 🤣 Yes. I wish I had made it a Pokedex now that talks out loud as it reads off the facts about the person. More romance stories would go so much smoother if they just had a love Pokedex.

Ahahaaa rent-a-girlfriend oh no 😂 that story might be the absolute *opposite* of the story vibe I'm trying to write. Everyone in that story could use a Madam Claire bird-guide to help them chillax and figure out what love means to them!

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Aug 14, 2023

To:Naru_Sheny

🤭 hehehe, the character magic is working already. Yes, we'll jump back and forth a bit between the two possible love interests 😉 (...and an unexpected third option 👀) but I promise it won't be harem, things will become more settled as the plot goes on!

Jun's going to learn and change a lot over the course of the story ❤️ a big change in his perspective is coming up in this next arc!

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Aug 14, 2023

To:ChronoSigma

🤣🤣 honestly I picked Holland because I thought it would be hilarious for him to choose the one area that technically doesn't exist anymore. (I mean, okay it's now North/South Holland providences of the Netherlands, but still.) He could have chosen anything else. Netherlands. Belgium. Denmark. Fantasy land. But nope. Definitely specifically Holland. 🤣

You're on track with the "false premise" here and it is something that will be brought up later on! But as for Madam Claire as a love interest 👀 mmm let's just say it's not impossible ~

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Aug 14, 2023

To:kazesenken

Hmm I'll have to consider it then 🧐 No matter what I do, I'm sure I'll end up accidentally referencing something (wands make me think Harry Potter too 🤣) so maybe I shouldn't worry too much. I'll ask around at the end of the story and see how people feel about an edit. Ty for the feedback! 👍

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Aug 14, 2023

And now, their romance begins and the adventure continues on... 😁 Lots of setup here for a second book! Also like, Arabella got an obsession for matching pairs or something 👀

WAIT THE WHOLE HARD THING WAS A CURSE FROM ARABELLA 🤣🤣 and the way to undo it was kousuke thinking he was gay. What a curse. Arabella's BL mind showing through. At least the curse did stop Kousuke's pervy desires for awhile...juuuust a short while.

Congrats on completing the book!!! 👏👏👏 I had no idea what would happen with each chapter, but it was a trip! honestly enjoyed the unpredictability and adventure!!

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Aug 14, 2023

Maxentius and Adelina!!! 😭😭😭 Noooo he didn't survive...
Epic Sads 😭

But heck yeah one floating island obtained!!! And for a moment I thought we might get an Arabella hug 😂 then it upgraded to kiss tease? 👀 Spear hero be still! This is not yet the time!

Arabella: When I first met you, Kousuke, you were dumb. And then, somehow...you got even dumber?? :l
Ahahaha omg Arabella 🤣 hitting him with the "kawaii" after all that. Is kousuke's pride in tact?

BUT FINALLY! A real kiss! 🎆 And then the toothbrush line. You know, I wouldn't imagine this scene happening any other way 👍

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Aug 14, 2023

To:Valentine

My plan for Junoroki (name mashup xD) was always to have him be "normal star" status just because I didn't want him to be Generic Chosen One Protagonist. Jun is special to Claire, which is why he gets all mixed up in this ❤️ (But his stars are most CERTAINLY a bit out of alignment now that he's traveled across worlds and spent way too much time with a World Breaker 🤣)

TOREN WOULD LIKE. PANIC. I don't even know. He might just go quiet and nod with his innocent little eyes, sitting there thinking "I don't get it 😀" Toren would probably pat Roki on the head. "If that's what you want to believe, Rokkun, then that's okay. We won't judge your elf delusions 😌"

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Aug 14, 2023

To:Deleted User

👀 that is actually a line I intend to use in an upcoming chapter~ hehe <3

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Aug 14, 2023

To:Christian Widjaya

Bro if I could see the future, so much stuff would be easier 👀 I vote for everyone to get a personal Madam Claire. End unemployement and all stress 😆

Joseon because I've watched way too many historical K-Drama matchmaker stories lately, ngl 😅 had to off-set it with more European / S.American references after that. Truthfully I wanted to show more of her globe-exploring adventures but the chapter was already running long.

Thank you though!!! I'm so glad you liked it! This chapter in particular was one of the most difficult to write, and I'm glad it's being received well. I was worried it might be too confusing.

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Aug 14, 2023

To:Funsui

If Jun had human magic in Farelle, he would definitely be overpowered xD (But probably accidentally hurt himself in his own spells more than anything.) Technically I still imagined his "Firebolt" spell being borrowed from Claire, and outside the realm of Farelle's magic system altogether. So even if he was human in appearance...it would probably still be sad fireworks 😆

Tana-bu-bu ribbon girl returns!! The other two are mostly just generic otherworld beings x) I had a bigger plot planned for them, but for sake of simplicity they got edited out. I just didn't want it to look like ribbon girl was a "single judging god ruling over them all" kind of thing, and wanted to have other voices there in the World Breaker court.

Yessss we've circled right back around to the beginning! But now, we know why Claire specifically isekai'd Jun <33 Some more hijinks to follow next chapter, I'm really excited!

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Aug 14, 2023

To:kazesenken

I wanted to make Jun relevant to explain why he got Yeeted to Another World, but didn't want to make him "Chosen One" status 🤣 he's just special to Claire <3

You're not wrong about the power level thing 👀 Claire might honestly outclass them. For the scope of the story, I probably won't cover that just to keep things simple. If this was shonen you best believe Claire would OMEGA OVERPOWER everything with Ultimate Love World Break Jutsu.

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Aug 14, 2023

To:kazesenken

"Magic Circles" was my first gut idea for this backstory chapter, and since I'm running against the clock here with my writing, I just went for it.

Afterwards I saw the FMA parallels and kinda went 😓 in my head. It's *very* close to the whole "Ed seeing the Truth and removing the need for magic circles" and I don't like that. After sleeping on it a few nights now, I'm thinking I might exchange the Magic Circles for some other limitation (like needing to use Wands, or having really long spell names) because for the extent of my story, the TYPE of limit doesn't really matter, just that there is one and Akaventus is trying to remove it.

So that's on my revision list for once the story is done I'm leaving it as-is for now, but the FMA-ness was definitely a "whoops" moment

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