Jul 05, 2023
First of all, this is a really lovely premise and I like the camera angle that your story has. That is not an easy thing to master and you have done it so well!
Secondly, this gives me vibes from one scenes in Paprika and I do love that movie!
Also, I think you ended the description of the surroundings during the fall just in time. Was maybe on a brink of starting to drag just a bit (imo) but you ended it on a sweet spot 👌
