Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    May 05, 2025

    Author's Commentary #155:

    Time to talk about Chapter 155: The Bertin meat shield.
    Red Reaper is pretty much evil Subaru from Re-Zero, except he doesn't go back in time when he "dies", rather he flat out revives on the spot. This is why he's such a fearsome opponent, as if he's pursuing multiple targets, he'll happily "kill himself" just to get a new DESPER and challenge his opponent instantly.

    One thing I will confirm is that despite being a grandmaster with a rating over 2700, he does not have Caïssa's blessing. Though he does have Assïac's curse, which is quite similar to it.

    As for the game, it features a Bertin gambit which is arguably just as aggressive as the Muzio gambit. I actually wrote this game back in Season 4, but decided to use it now. I also wanted to demonstrate how ruthless Tsar Grigori could be. Speaking of which, lets talk about his opponent, Frieda Rhodes.

    フリーダ・ロードス (Frieda Rhodes) is how her name is spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is November 1st, which is the day the European Union was formed. Her rating of 1993 is a reference to the year the EU was formed as well.

    Her favorite piece is the queen. Which is ironic, since it was a queen that ultimately mated her and resulted in her losing her free will.

    She is obviously a high-ranking European official, however, she was not the greatest chess player. Now she'll be Tsar Grigori's proxy, meaning he'll have even more control over Europe.

    Speaking of Europe, in this universe, Germany has become the German empire of Prussia, thanks to Red Reaper conquering it. And speaking of Red Reaper, it's now a race against time for Okisato to get back to London and get the other members of the chess club out of there, since he's the only one capable of beating Red Reaper.

    As for the timeline of events, I'll confirm that it essentially took Red Reaper 40 minutes to get back to London and get an active DESPER. This chapter actually went through a significant revision where I decided to have Red Reaper utilize his ability to warp to any secret puzzle cafe in the world. I still wanted to keep the game, so I revised things to have him willingly go with Tsar Grigori to trap Frieda, and had the warship warped to London at the start. It still took 40 minutes total, but now things make more sense.

    One final thing I'll mention is that in the original draft, this chapter was originally Chapter 156, but I decided to move it up one space following the revisions. While Season 5 didn't get revised as much as say Season 4, there is still one very noteworthy revision which I'll discuss in the next commentary.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    May 05, 2025

    [Game log #83]

    Here's the game between Carol and Lindsey from Chapter 137. This was actually the original game used in Chapter 34: Desperado before I rewrote the game there. I felt the game didn't fit the play-style of Okisato and Gyro, but Carol and Lindsey are a different story. Plus, it was a game that I won without any help against Chess.com's 1800-rated Wally bot, so I felt it was a worthy game to have be Carol's big moment. I also felt a little bad about removing the game from the story, so this chapter gave me the perfect chance to rectify that and put it back in the story.

    [Event "N/A"]
    [Site "Kawaguchi, Saitama"]
    [Date "2024.08.18"]
    [Round "N/A"]
    [White "Carol Cooke (569)"]
    [Black "Lindsey Cobbler (1812)"]
    [Result "1-0"]

    1. e4 d6 2. d4 Nf6 3. Nc3 g6 4. Nf3 Bg7 5. Bc4 O-O 6. O-O c6 7. d5 Bg4 8. h3 Bd7 9. e5 dxe5 10. Nxe5 Nxd5 11. Nxd5 Bxe5 12. Ne3 h5 13. Re1 Bc8 14. Bd3 Be6 15. Nc4 Bg7 16. Ne5 Qc7 17. Bf4 Nd7 18. Nxg6 Qd8 19. Nxf8 Nxf8 20. Bh7+ Nxh7 21. Qxd8+ Rxd8 22. Rad1 Rxd1 23. Rxd1 Bxb2 24. Bh6 Nf6 25. Rd8+ Kh7 26. Bg5 Kg6 27. Be3 b6 28. Ra8 Nd5 29. Bd2 Bf5 30. c4 Nc3 31. Bxc3 Bxc3 32. Rxa7 Kf6 33. Rc7 Be4 34. f3 Be5 35. Rb7 Bd4+ 36. Kh1 Bg6 37. Rc7 Bc5 38. Rxc6+ Ke5 39. a4 Bd3 40. a5 Bd6 41. axb6 Kd4 42. c5 Kd5 43. cxd6 exd6 44. Rc7 Be4 45. b7 Bxf3 46. gxf3 f5 47. b8=Q Ke5 48. Qb2+ Kf4 49. Kg2 Ke3 50. Rc3+ Kd4 51. Qb4+ Ke5 52. Qb5+ Kf6 53. Qd5 h4 54. Qxd6+ Kg5 55. Rc4 Kh5 56. Qf8 Kg5 57. f4+ Kg6 58. Rc6+ Kh7 59. Qf7+ Kh8 60. Rc8# 1-0

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