Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Participant - MAL x Honeyfeed Writing Contest 2023

    Aug 14, 2024

    Author's Commentary #170:

    Time to talk about Chapter 170: Enigma.
    Phantom is certainly living up to the title of this chapter. He truly is mysterious, but sadly the wait to find out more about him will be a bit longer. Another thing that was long was the game.

    While the game itself is really solid and features yet another Halloween gambit, I honestly didn't enjoy writing it as much. I feel it being 71 moves and the fact that I wanted to get this chapter done so I could upload the chapter after it were the big contributing factors as to why. Despite that, I doubt this game will make my worst games list as the game itself was brilliant. To give a bit more context, the game was played against Chess.com's 3200-rated Level 25 engine bot, with assisted mode on. As for why, I wanted Phantom to show his true potential against a Halloween gambit, and as a result, I got an epic game. It's a shame I just didn't have the motivation to give it some more flair in the writing department. But on a brighter note, Yuzuha is alive.

    Zago throwing himself in front of Red Reaper did the trick, and as a result, he got challenged instead of Yuzuha. If this was a game, Zago would have been given the choice of whether or not to save Yuzuha, with Yuzuha dying if he chooses not to. However, even choosing to save her wouldn't guarantee her safety as Red Reaper would drag her in as a spectator and make the punishment for losing, just Yuzuha dying in order to break the player. And naturally, the fight would be intense as there would be essentially no help or assistance against a grandmaster-level opponent. Luckily, Zago drew so the wager was nullified, and now Okisato can face Red Reaper once again in the climax of the Season. And this next match will not disappoint as it is not only worthy enough to make it into my top 5 favorite games, but the writing is on point and it will feature a brand new opening. In fact, this upcoming game might even take the number 1 spot as my favorite game in the series, since its THAT good.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    En Passant Grandmaster
    Chapter:170

    Aug 13, 2024

    Author's Commentary #169:

    Time to talk about Chapter 169: Halloween slaughter.
    In case it wasn't obvious, I love the Halloween gambit. It's easily my favorite gambit and unlike the Muzio gambit, is much easier to pull off. Anyway, Kazuya's back and he's challenging Utami.

    The Utami vs Kazuya match was planned ages ago, however, I struggled to find a good place to have it take place in the story. But with this arc, I found a good place, not to mention Utami is now only 99 points below Kazuya in rating so it makes sense for her to face him now. I originally was going to just have the DESPER create a replica of the school roof, but felt Kazuya would rather have it be the actual school roof for greater effect.

    I had a few games in mind for the match, but after getting an oh so perfect Halloween gambit match, I knew it had to be the game used. And as a result of Utami outright thrashing Kazuya, Kazuya's dead and Utami's back in Japan. Maida even makes a cameo too.

    One notable thing I'll mention is Utami's new surname. Though it is still Enoki, it's spelled with different kanji. 恵野木 is how it is spelled in kanji and it means "to bestow", "wilderness", and "tree".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translation, feel free to correct me).

    This change is not noticeable in English, but I felt I needed to address how Utami felt about her surname considering how much she hates her family. Though now, she's the only member left. As such, she's now free from the influence of her family and can carve her own path. And as for Maida, she'll be getting more screen-time in the future, so look forward to seeing more of her.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    En Passant Grandmaster
    Chapter:169

    Aug 13, 2024

    Author's Commentary #124:

    Time to talk about Chapter 124: Old man Roichi and Jijiji.
    I honestly thought I'd never revise the chapter this was based off of, nor ever bring the characters of Jijiji and Ro back. The reason for that is because I felt the original chapter featuring them was one of the weakest chapters in the series.

    However, after finalizing the Kirikawa family tree, I decided to bring those two back. Ro, now Roichi, is now Jijiji's older triplet brother. As for Zuina's exact relationship to him, Jijiji and his wife had quintuplets, all of whom were girls. The 4th born, Nayon, is Miyoko's mother, and as you know, Miyoko is Zuina and Rebelle's mother.

    In terms of other notable lines, the third oldest quintuplet, Sanari, is Fubuki and Hitomi's mother, meaning she's the grandmother of Yuni, Serika, Kasumi, Nika, and Miku. There are other notable Kirikawa members, however, they won't appear in this series.

    I actually did post a full family tree of the Kirikawa clan in my gallery, but be warned there are spoilers for some of my other series, notably En Passant Grandmaster, and the characters from Escape Witch characters all sport their most up to date looks in-universe. In other words, their Escape Witch looks. With that out of the way, let's do some bios for the new characters.

    切川 路一 (Kirikawa Roichi) is how Roichi's name is spelled in kanji. 路一 means "road" and "one", while 切川 means "to cut" and "river".

    ジジジ (Jijiji) aka 切川 一二三 (Kirikawa Kazujizou) is how Jijiji's name is spelled in Japanese. 一二三 means "one", "two", and "three".

    As for their younger triplet sister Minii, 切川 三二一 (Kirikawa Minii) is how her name is spelled in kanji. 三二一 means "three", "two", and "one" and is essentially Kazujirou's name spelled backwards in kanji.

    The triplets' birthday is March 3rd, which they share with Kazujirou's descendants, Kasumi, Nika, and Miku.

    Roichi and Jijiji's favorite food is soba curry while Minii's is shrimp tempura on rice.

    And as a bonus, here's Sachiko. 古林 幸恋 (Kobayashi Sachiko) is how Sachiko's name is spelled in kanji. 幸恋 means "happiness" and "love", while 古林 means "ancient" and "forest".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is October 15th, which she shares with Rindo Kobayashi from Shokugeki no Soma. Though their surnames are spelled differently in kanji, Sachiko's surname is nonetheless a homage to Rindo's.

    Her favorite food is rice and veggies.

    One final thing I'll address is what happened with Roichi at the nursing home. Essentially, a yandere nurse there had the hots for him and kidnapped him in order to force herself on him. The nurse then fled and was never heard from again. Unbeknownst to Roichi and the Kirikawa clan in general, the incident led to the nurse becoming pregnant, meaning Roichi does in fact have descendants. One of which being a very important character in another series of mine.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Spice of life [Remake]
    Chapter:124

    Aug 12, 2024

    Author's Commentary #123:

    Time to talk about Chapter 123: Jumping the gun.
    This marks the end of the Rebelle mini-arc, and it certainly ended much different than in the original. In the original, Rebelle was assimilated into the Demon queen cult but then shipped off to the Roboborg union. The original plan was for her to be turned into a cyborg known as R3-B3-113, and would eventually meet her end when the Roboborg union was invaded. However, that was not possible in the remake due to the Roboborg union being destroyed before Ookuma's death, so naturally I had to revise Rebelle's fate.

    While there was no chance of her surviving, I decided that unlike in the original, she'd die with her mind intact. Though this decision largely came about because it just made more sense logically for the cyanide pill to kill her before she was assimilated. She ended up coming close to being assimilated though and lost all her hair in the process. And with that, Rebelle Milverton Adler is officially dead, but her influence will live on thanks to Cyril. Hilda might have realized what truly happened to Ookuma, but thanks to Benise's antics, she's gonna be in even more hot water than before, especially since Cyril secretly recorded everything from start to finish and uploaded it online. This was what Rebelle requested of him two chapters ago when she gave herself up. She had hoped she could negotiate, and would have survived if Benise wasn't present, however, her gamble failed, so she had Cyril record and upload everything as a final middle finger to Hilda.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:123


    Aug 10, 2024

    Author's Commentary #121:

    Time to talk about Chapter 121: Rebelle's downfall.
    Despite having the same name and similar premise as it's original counterpart, this chapter is drastically different from how it was in the original. Instead of running around in terror, Rebelle's now composed and confident. Hilda also wasn't present in the original but is now taking center stage due to her being the last major antagonist of the series. Speaking of Hilda, I don't think I did her bio yet, so let's do it now.

    白金 ヒルダ (Hakkin Hilda) is how Hilda's name is written in Japanese. 白金 means "white" and "gold".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translation, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is February 4th. It's actually one day after the birthday of Hilda Valentine Goneril from Fire Emblem Three Houses. Hilda does take some slight inspiration from her in terms of name and design, but since Onrai actually shares his birthday her, I decided to have Hilda's birthday be the day after.

    Her favorite food is boba on fish skewers.

    The Hakkin family is actually the richest family in the world and is largely based in Europe. However, they have branches all over the world. Hilda hails from the Japanese branch, which is how she first met Ruchi. She has many siblings around the world, but began rising to prominence in the family due to her latching on to Ruchi's success. Of course, with Ruchi out of the picture now, the head of the Hakkin family will naturally pin the blame on everything going wrong on Hilda, in order to save face and not lose his position as chairman of the council.

    As for Rebelle, she'll have one final chance to turn things around. I actually didn't intend to change up this chapter so much, but once again, last minute inspiration struck, and I think it was for the better. As such, what was once only a single chapter, has now evolved into a mini-arc. I hope you enjoy it.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Spice of life [Remake]
    Chapter:121





    Aug 07, 2024

    Author's Commentary #118:

    Time to talk about Chapter 118: Fubuki and Serika.
    While parts of this chapter were in the original, the majority of it is remake exclusive. This chapter also offers some big spoilers for Escape Witch, namely the fact that Serika is actually the biological daughter of Fubuki and Akuma Ookuma. While she won't learn that fact until the time Escape Witch takes place, it does play a major role in her character development, especially when she finds out Yuni is actually her younger sister.

    As for the chapter, Fubuki decided to risk venturing out to the remains of Ookuma's place after failing to get a solid lead on what happened to Ookuma. Reika surmised Fubuki would show up there eventually, and used her authority within the police to ensure that she could access the crime scene whenever as part of the investigation, in order to not arouse suspicion.

    As for why Fubuki gets nervous whenever she visits her old home, its because when she returned there after bringing Yuni to Hitomi's place, the house was on fire. While no one was hurt, and Fubuki did have back-ups of the material that had been lost, she still has nightmares on what would have happened if she hadn't gotten home in time to take Yuni to Hitomi's.

    As mentioned before, she doesn't want people knowing Yuni is her daughter as that would make Yuni a target for I.L.U. to kidnap. That same line of thinking is why she doesn't want to make contact with Serika, as she fears for her safety. She's honestly experiencing a wave of emotions, learning that the daughter she thought was dead is alive and well. But now that she knows what happened to Ookuma, her and Reika will work together to take down the remnants of Ookuma's party.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Spice of life [Remake]
    Chapter:118


    Aug 05, 2024

    Author's Commentary #116:

    Time to talk about Chapter 116: A small fight and a tearful reunion.
    The fated Yuni and Serika encounter has occurred, and they got in a huge fight. This marks the start of the bad blood between them though ironically enough, they never get into anymore physical altercations after this. The reason for that is whenever they think of the fight, they remember Rika making them do labor as punishment for making a mess. Of course, the two constantly get in shouting matches with each other and as hinted in the chapter, are set to become academic rivals.

    As for the ending of the chapter, I was originally planning for it to be part of the next chapter, however, I didn't want this chapter to end on a somber note so I stuck it in here. Masaru is alive and well. Thanks to the Ginkawa's medical technology, he now has a new body that is exactly like how his old one was before he was turned into a cyborg. Creating a clone of his body was easy, but transplanting his consciousness was the hard part. Shiori, Emeri, and Harumi were heavily involved in the project. As for Masaru's cyborg body, it was destroyed after Masaru's consciousness was successfully transferred.

    Now, the next chapter will be far more wholesome as the restaurant celebrates it's 1-year anniversary. And now that Masaru's back, things are really looking bright for the cast. And trust me, Masaru's reaction to the news about the baby will be priceless.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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