Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Apr 19, 2024

    Author's Commentary #56:

    Time to talk about Chapter 56: A meadow of chess and a little night music.
    The long awaited Peter vs Mimoko rematch is here. And what better way to highlight it's grandeur than with Mozart's Eine kleine nachtmusik. Fun fact: Eine kleine nachtmusik translates to "a little night music" which is why it's in the title. I would highly recommend listening to the song in the background while reading the chapter as the music truly makes the chapter. Heck, I was even listening to the song as I wrote the game.

    Speaking of which, the game started off much like the previous game between these two mainly because I wanted them to play through the original game with no time constraints. However, I then noticed the blunder Peter made by moving his pawn to d5 instead of moving his knight away. However, that in turn opened up a new avenue to approach the game, and I couldn't have been happier.

    This chapter is easily one one of my top 5 chapters I'd want to see animated the most. And of the released chapters and even the ones that have yet to release, this might even be my favorite chapter. Even though there weren't too many crazy plays, the atmosphere (mainly the music) truly made this chapter amazing.

    Fun story: When I was young, I had a game in the Chessmaster series (I forget which version it was) and one of the music tracks you could have play was, you guessed it, Eine kleine nachtmusik. As such, I've always associated the piece with chess, which is easily why I wanted it to be featured in a chapter of this novel.

    As for Peter, he doesn't need a DESPER, he can imagine a meadow of chess just fine without it. And not only did he and Mimoko have fun during the game, I also had fun writing it. I guess until the next Peter vs Mimoko ft Eine kleine nachtmusik match, this chapter will be my favorite.

    As for why Mimoko got flustered at the end, Peter said his thoughts out loud. This truly is the happiest he's been playing chess. If you know the history of Paul Morphy, the person Peter's based off of, you'll know that he ended up walking away from chess because he got too bored of it. Peter was in a similar boat which is why he frequently implements odds and seeks out strong rivals. But after playing Mimoko, Peter realized that she had the potential to truly rival him and as such, he longed for a proper rematch and when he got it, he had the time of his life.

    Well that was a long commentary, but I guess it goes to show how passionate I am about this chapter. I'm glad it's finally published so others can read it.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 19, 2024

    Author's Commentary #8:

    Time to talk about Chapter 8: The spies from Danablu.
    This is a new chapter for Spice of life that was originally adapted from a chapter of Mystery ghost foresight like Chapter 7. However, this one ended up being greatly edited from it's original counterpart due to being added to Spice of life for the contest.

    I guess now is a good time to talk about Mimi's fellow spies. In addition to Mimi, there was Mille, Marzi, Vivi, Sherry, Eluf, Katrina, and Hylda. As for the countries, Denmark was Danablu, the Soviet Union was Crimgulag, and Japan was Kabuto.

    As for how Mimi ended up frozen in the first place, one of her team members betrayed everyone and as a result some of the team members like Hylda and Mille got captured. Mimi was attempting to rescue Hylda, but an assailant shoved her into a cryogenic freezing pod. When she came to, she was in Japan with Rika.

    Originally, this chapter was going to serve as buildup for something larger, but I ended up casting that idea aside in favor of using Mille to explain the merger of the Danablu world and the regular one when I was originally writing this for the contest. Once I submitted the remake to the contest, however, I began writing a season 2 of the remake and that was where I was able to finally pull off the original plot point I started with this chapter. I'll explain a bit more about what I'm talking about in the next commentary, since the next chapter is the climatic finale of the Rika and Mimi flashback arc.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 18, 2024

    Author's Commentary #55:

    Time to discuss Chapter 55: A hair stakes match.
    Like the previous chapter, this was originally set to be two different chapters, but I felt they worked better combined as one. "Not so bald" was going to be the title of the second half of this chapter before I merged it.

    Now let's talk about the puns. Obviously, this chapter title and the draft title are puns on the phrases "A high stakes match" and "Not so bad". I was actually debating which one to use for the chapter, but ultimately went with "A hair stakes match" as I felt the other title could be spoilery.

    Now let's go over the game. This one was short and sweet, but the one thing I really wanted it to highlight was Iori's inner thought process. Iori is obviously smarter than she lets on, but how much smarter is still a mystery. Okisato can't quite get a read on her, but he definitely suspects she's hiding something dark.

    Finally, Iori's now bald... Just kidding. Utami ended up deciding to go with the bald cap, mainly because she felt not shaving Iori would deprive her of what she wanted; content. Of course, Iori still managed to get content out of the ordeal. Though thanks to the gagball, she's now unable to properly challenge Haruki.

    Even if Haruki activated his DESPER against her, the DESPER would deem that Iori's at a disadvantage due to the gagball, and thus unable to properly voice her terms for the wager, thus it would declare the encounter a draw and deactivate.

    On a completely unrelated note, I'm now caught up with the commentaries for this series. This means that new commentaries will be released daily to coincide with the daily chapter releases.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 18, 2024

    Author's Commentary #54:

    Time to discuss Chapter 54: Intellect and madness.
    Originally, these were two separate chapters, but after seeing how short the first half was, I decided to combine it with the next chapter. The original names for these chapters were "The mad queen and the girl blessed by chess" and "Chaos factor".

    The point of the chapter was to put the spotlight on Utami. First, Mimoko purified her of her mad persona, but unintentionally made her worse off than she was before. To make matters worse, the piece of shit is aware and has now declared his intent to rope Utami into his diabolical plan.

    However, an unlikely savior has appeared. Everyone's favorite streamer, Iori-chan! Yes, Iori's going to become relevant in the story again, and what better way to make her reemergence than to hit Utami with a crazy bet that loser shaves their head and eyebrows and gets a head tattoo... Ok, maybe she isn't quite the unlikely savior, but Peter certainly is.

    Peter is actually aware of the piece of shit's plan, however, he refuses to just give away the answer, mainly because he is both hoping for Okisato to guess things on his own, and because telling Okisato could risk the piece of shit changing plans and coming back at a later date with an even nastier one. He will however, offer Okisato clarity should he guess something right about the piece of shit's plan.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 18, 2024

    Author's Commentary #52:

    It's time to talk about Chapter 52: The mad queen unleashed.
    Just as promised, here's another Důras gambit game. Bibi was completely humiliated and Utami has descended into madness. Though it seems like Mimoko's going to put a halt to that. I guess as a consolation prize for her loss, we'll discuss Bibi.

    Originally, Bibi was meant to be the captain of a rival chess team which would serve as the antagonists for a planned arc. However, I ended up abandoning the idea when I finalized the story for Season 2. However, I still wanted to include her in the story so I had her be fodder for Utami.

    Her name in kanji is 枇杷木 美琵 (Biwaki Bibi). Her first name, 美琵, means "beauty" and "biwa", while her last name, 枇杷木, means "loquat", "pole", and "tree".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is July 10th which is a reference to the year 710, which was the start of the Nara period. The reason I chose this is because the biwa was said to have first reached Japan during the Nara period (710 to 794).

    Her favorite piece is the queen, since Bibi views herself as a regal woman.

    While Bibi had a rough time and is going to drop in her rating a bit, this won't be the last we see of her in the story. And who knows, maybe I'll resurrect the rival chess team idea I had when she comes back into the story again.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 18, 2024

    Author's Commentary #21:

    It's time to discuss Chapter 21: Chess experiment.
    his chapter essentially served as a way to help spread word of the chess club throughout the school, and establish Maida as the supervising teacher for it. As such, I decided that it would be fitting for her to have her class do an experiment related to chess. The experiment is essentially seeing what the most common moves are amongst the class. Though when class reconvenes, the students will play each other from the e4 Nf6 position so look forward to that.

    Finally, the big secret regarding Hagemi is out; she's the top female chess player in the world. I'll talk more about her background later, so for now, we'll just go over some basic trivia about her.

    Her name is written as 承先 励美 (Shousen Hagemi) in kanji, with her first name, 励美, translates to "Inspire" and "beautiful". Now remember how I said way back in Author's Commentary #3 that 承先 can mean "first"? That's why I chose it to be Yuusuke and Hagemi's surname as Hagemi is currently the number 1 female chess player in the world.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is March 31st which she shares with Koneru Humpy, an Indian grandmaster and one of the top female chess players of all time.

    Her favorite piece is the rook. Initially, she thought rooks were lousy, but quickly found how valuable they are in the endgame, which led to them becoming her favorite piece.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 18, 2024

    Author's Commentary #7:

    It's finally time to talk about Chapter 7: Rika and Mimi.
    This chapter was not present in the original version, though believe it or not, it was written and published in my novel, Mystery ghost foresight, which was originally going to be a prequel to Spice of life. However, I ended up losing motivation for Mystery ghost, and discontinued the series. However, I ended up writing Mimi and Rika's history as part of a mystery, and when I decided to rewrite Spice of life, I felt it would be best to put the full backstory in and do it early in the story.

    Originally, only the final part of the flashback was included in the original, but it ended up being included in Chapter 40. Having Mimi's backstory early was something I felt was essential for the remake which is why it is taking place at Chapter 7. The flashback also gives some character development to Rika so that's another good reason to have it early.

    As for the flashback itself, you'll notice that Mimi is actually speaking Danish when she first awakes. I used a machine translation, so if there are mistakes, feel free to correct me. As for why I had her speak in her native language, I actually enjoy it when characters occasionally speak in their native languages as it can give more personality to them. Sadly this is the last Danish you'll hear Mimi speak in the story, at least not counting Danish dishes and the codenames of her fellow spies. Intriguingly enough, she's fluent in 10 different languages.

    Speaking of which, all the Danablu spies are named after Danish food dishes, with Mimi's being salmon laks. As for Mimi herself, she draws heavy inspiration from Lily of Spy Kyoushitsu. The other Danablu spies also draw inspiration from the characters of Spy Kyoushitsu as well, but not as heavily as Mimi does.

    One final thing I'll mention is that Mimi is 165 cm tall and her birthday is January 20th, which is actually National cheese lovers day. This is actually very fitting for Mimi since her favorite food is danablu cheese.

    Speaking of which, all the major characters in the series have a favorite food. Some I'll reveal early, while others I'll hold off on revealing until they appear in the story.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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