Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Sep 15, 2024

    Author's Commentary #198:

    Time to talk about Chapter 198: Meadow Hay Mercury.
    The climatic showdown of Side Story 3 is here, and there's quite a lot to talk about. First off, the mercury being smeared on the pieces is actually based off a true story where a Russian player smeared mercury from a thermometer on her opponent's pieces. Kugisaki ended up going overboard though and smearing pure mercury on all the pieces, more so on the black due to thinking it would be harder to spot, and that Okisato would be playing as black. However, since Ginji used his DESPER, and there weren't official tournament pairings in effect, he ended up being forced to play as black, meaning he unintentionally got a higher exposure to the mercury than Okisato.

    Speaking of which, the mercury poisoning is how I decided to justify Ginji playing lower than his skill level. I was trying to play matches against bots around his elo, but the games ended up going over 50 moves no matter what opening I seemed to play. Thus, I lowered the elo and eventually managed to get this game. I was originally going to have Okisato win with a Bongcloud, but the Meadow Hay worked out much better.

    As for Kugisaki, he's essentially been turned into a Mechanical Turk, but still retains his consciousness. For those who don't know, the Mechanical Turk was a famous chess playing automaton built in 1770 and was claimed to be an automaton chess playing machine. In reality, it was secretly controlled from within by a skilled chess player, which is why it was able to beat so many at the time.

    The other fun tidbit is that Kugisaki's name, Shin, can translate to "new" in Japanese, however Kugisaki's name actually uses a different kanji for Shin. 新 is the kanji that means "new", thus the joke is that Raymond is essentially calling Kugisaki "New Turk" which is fitting since he's essentially a new Mechanical Turk machine now.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translation, feel free to correct me).

    As for Ginji, he's likely to face some disciplinary action for being aware of the mercury plot, though it will probably be far less severe than Kugisaki's punishment. Most likely just a fine and week-long ban from playing competitively.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 15, 2024

    Author's Commentary #195:

    Time to talk about Chapter 195: Okinawa's Himitsusama.
    First off, a small update; I've retconned the Season titles, meaning Season 2 Part 1 is now just Season 2, Season 2 Part 2 is Season 3, Season 3 is Season 4, and Season 4 is Season 5. This also means the planned Season 5 is now the planned Season 6. With that out of the way, let's talk about the chapter.

    This Chapter serves as the climax of the arc. I was originally planning to have Kugisaki be the one to face off against Mizuse, but decided that he'll be the type of character that never plays chess. Speaking of which, let's talk about him and Snye Pher.

    スナイ・ファー (Snye Pher) is how Snye's name is spelled in katakana. His name is an obvious pun on "Sniper" which is fitting considering he is an ex-military sniper.

    His birthday is January 28th. I chose the date at random, so there's no greater significance behind why this date is his birthday.

    His favorite piece is the queen, due to believing it is the best sniper on the board.

    釘崎 紳 (Kugisaki Shin) is how Kugisaki's name is spelled in kanji. 紳 means "aristocrat" while 釘崎 means "nail" and "promontory".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His birthday is April 19th. I chose the date at random, so there's no greater significance behind why this date is his birthday.

    Since he doesn't play chess, he doesn't have a favorite piece.

    As for the game, it was a game played against Chess.com's Nelson bot, who's known as the queen bot, due to him always playing aggressively with his queen. As stated previously, I originally intended for Kugisaki to be the one to face Mizuse, but decided against it due to wanting to build him up as a character that hates chess. On that note, he's likely to return in a future Side Story.

    Speaking of which, this Side Story is quickly approaching it's end. The next chapter will likely be the last one, but it's possible I'll extend it a bit more. Then, it's onto the next Side Story.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 14, 2024

    Author's Commentary #197:

    Time to talk about Chapter 197: The endangered legacy of Mizuse Niimi.
    While I originally intended for this to act as the intro to another Side Story, I felt it was best to just merge the two together so that the story flowed better. Now let's talk about Mizuse's proteges, Penny and Sandra.

    ペネロペ・"ペニー"・バニラ (Penelope "Penny" Banilla) is how Penny's name is spelled in katakana. Her last name was originally intended to just be a pun on "vanilla", however there's apparently a beauty company known as Banila, which makes her last name fit a bit more as it could be argued to reference that, even though that was never the intention.

    Her birthday is May 6th. I chose this date at random, so there's no greater significance behind why this date is her birthday.

    Her favorite piece is the queen, just like Mizuse.

    Penny was originally designed a while back and planned to be a part of another novel, however, I decided to add her into this one and tweaked her design a bit.

    サンドラ・レイシー (Sandra Lacey) is how Sandra's name is spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is July 2nd. I chose this date at random, so there's no greater significance behind why this date is her birthday.

    Her favorite piece is also the queen, just like Mizuse.

    Both her and Penny are 22 years old and half-Japanese Okinawa natives. The two met Mizuse after she found both on the streets in a similar situation to the one she was in, and gave them the chance at a new life. The two quickly rose to become two of her top proteges and closest friends. If Mizuse had officially named a successor, it would no doubt have been these two, as she trusted and respected them the most. They do play chess, however, their skills are nowhere near Mizuse's with Sandra being rated 325 and Penny being 650. Thus, none of them are likely going to be SPCM candidates.

    As for the match, it's going to be interesting. Ginji is higher-rated than Okisato, but Kugisaki is also up to his old tricks. Then again, Okisato always manages to win when it counts.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 13, 2024

    Author's Commentary #196:

    Time to talk about Chapter 196: The philosophy of Mizuse Niimi.
    This was originally going to mark the end to Side Story 3, however, I felt it honestly was better to merge this with the follow-up Side Story I had planned for this arc. Now let's talk about some things. First off, I'm likely going to be rewriting and retconning some things from Season 2 and 3 regarding Mizuse. This probably won't happen immediately, but I'll be sure to mention when it does.

    As for the chapter, I decided to have it be a final interview with Mizuse. The main reason for this was that I wanted to showcase a bit more of Mizuse's personality and worldview.

    One final thing I'll touch on are the crossover references. The bit about Leona is referencing my other series, Life Stream: Helping a cute girl gain views and likes. The event being referenced though actually occurs after the main events of said story, but before it's epilogue chapters.

    As for Streama festivalen, that's a reference to Streamer Royale, which is set to canonically take place in 5 days in-universe on September 5th, 2024. Since Mizuse was also a beauty streamer, she was invited to the event, but sadly died before it could begin. In-universe, the event plans to honor her on her birthday, September 9th. I actually uploaded some art of what the memorial image for Mizuse would look like.

    On it, 24 images of the various hairstyles Mizuse has sported, along with Mizuse herself sitting in front, are present. The reason for this is because Mizuse was set to turn 25, but died before she could. Thus, Mizuse herself is meant to represent the 25th image that would have been used to celebrate her 25th birthday.

    Now that Mizuse's backstory has been told, the story will now shift towards her company and the troubles it's facing following her death. I originally wanted that to be it's own separate Side Story, just to keep this one solely focused on Mizuse, but it just flows better to have the two together, so that's what I'm going with.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 12, 2024

    Author's Commentary #175:

    Time to talk about the intro to Side Story 1, Chapter 175: The cheating Jester.
    Buwahaha! The infamous Jester finally makes his debut in this story. And with that, comes his infamous theme song. But first, I want to talk about Grampy Harold.

    ハロルド・クック (Harold Cooke) is how his name is spelled in katakana.

    His birthday is October 18th. I chose the date at random so there's no greater significance behind why this day is his birthday.

    He doesn't really play chess, but his favorite piece is most likely the rook, since to him they're the most rough n' tough looking piece on the board.

    Now time to talk about Jester. First off, we'll start with his theme song. I attempted to do a Japanese translation of his theme song and provided it below.
    Fair warning, since I used Google translate, there's probably a bunch of errors, but here's the Japanese version of Jester's theme song.
    ヨヨイ! 俺は江戸の奥から来た最大の犯罪者です。俺は組織犯罪界の大物です。誰もが俺の名を恐れています! 俺が成し遂げた残虐行為はすべて! 殺人! 誘拐!麻薬密輸! 誰もできません 我が力に匹敵せよ! 盗難!暴行! 戦争犯罪! さあ、皆、我が怒りを恐れよ!彼らはピエロは愚か者だと言います。さて、今誰が笑ってるの、バカ?ララララ。俺は悪で、卑劣で、邪悪で、非人道的で、暗黒忍術大名-おおおおおおおおおお。よおお!
    [Yoyoi! Ore wa Edo no oku kara kita saidai no hanzai-shadesu. Ore wa soshiki hanzai-kai no ōmonodesu. Daremoga ore no na o osorete imasu! Ore ga nashitogeta zangyaku kōi wa subete! Satsujin! Yūkai! Mayaku mitsuyu! Dare mo dekimasen waga chikara ni hitteki seyo! Tōnan! Bōkō! Sensō hanzai! Sā, kai, waga ikari o osoreyo! Karera wa piero wa orokamonoda to iimasu. Sate, ima dare ga waratteru no, baka? Rararara Ore-sama wa aku de, hiretsude, jaaku de, hijindōteki de, ankoku ninjutsu daimyō ōo ō ōo ō. Yo ō]

    As for how his themesong actually sounds, it sounds similar to Master Kohgha's theme from The Legend of Zelda series. Speaking of which, Master Kohga was the biggest influence behind his character along with Don Kanoji from Bleach and Captain Buggy from One piece. Though there's also some Team Rocket in there too considering he always ends up getting blasted into the sky whenever his schemes fail. Needless to say, he's a comedic villain.

    ジェスター is how his name would be spelled in Japanese.

    His birthday is April 1st, which is also April Fool's Day. Iori also shares this birthday with him, but the two have no relationship to each other whatsoever.

    As for his favorite piece, it's the king, because when he plays chess, the king isn't the most vulnerable piece, since he cheats.

    Jester is pretty much a staple villain in the Jouzu-verse and one of my favorite characters so it's nice to finally be able to have him debut in this series.

    Speaking of cheating, I thought it would be a good idea to have Jester cheat in his chess game. The idea of him using a JESPER was actually an idea I thought up back when I was writing Season 1. The biggest challenge with the game though was determining how and where he'd cheat as I didn't want him to get an overwhelming advantage against Mimoko. Luckily, his skill at chess is pretty bad, and his elo would likely be 0 if he didn't manipulate his rating points.

    Believe it or not, he actually doesn't have a WWCF card, nor is he a WWCF member, but the WWCF has in fact banned him from all official tournaments due to his cheating. Even a majority of the underground leagues ban him from play.

    However, he is powerful enough to not die when he loses a DESPER match. At worst, he usually ends up getting blasted away. Guess you could say he's on a whole different plane of existence, but nonetheless, is still a comedic villain.

    One final thing I'll briefly touch on is the Kirikawa clan. Like Jester, the Kirikawa clan is another staple of the Jouzu-verse with various major characters hailing from it. And as confirmed in this chapter, Harold, Carol, and Iori are all Kirikawas by blood. The Kirikawa family tree in the gallery showcases the exact relationship, but it will also be touched on more in the story as well. And I will confirm that Jester will return and he will meet Nyoan. Of course, I still have to write that chapter so it may not happen for a while.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 12, 2024

    Author's Commentary #184:

    Time to talk about Chapter 184: Executive circuit breaker.
    As mentioned in the previous commentary, the game featured in this chapter was actually written months ago, and intended for Season 4. Obviously, that didn't happen, but the game is here in Side Story 2 in all it's glory, and boy is it epic.

    Like his ancestor, Paul Morphy, Peter is a part of the club that has delivered a castling checkmate. The crazy thing about Paul's case though is that he was only around 12 years old and playing with rook odds, meaning he was down his a-rook, yet he still managed to pull off a castling checkmate against his father, Alonzo Morphy. Peter's on a whole different level though and now gets his 10th castling checkmate overall. Now let's talk about his opponent as well as the remaining member of the Tabemono team that has yet to get a bio.

    キット・ジーグラー卿 (Sir Kit Ziegler) is how Kit's name is spelled in Japanese. His name is actually a pun on "circuit", which is fitting considering he constantly relies on a chip implant to be good at chess.

    His birthday is May 21st. I chose this date at random, so there's no greater significance behind why this date is his birthday.

    His favorite piece is the bishop, mainly because he deems it to be the most powerful minor piece.

    バーニー・ルーミス (Bernie Ruumis) is how Bernie's name is spelled in katakana.

    His birthday is July 5th.

    His favorite piece is the knight.

    Now that Peter and Utami have won, things are looking pretty good for the chess club. However, Rodeo must now face his toughest opponent yet, Ginji Inohara, and if he loses, Okisato will have to play Rize, who's true skill is unknown. Speaking of unknowns, Bernie's an even bigger one. Just because Okisato wasn't able to find him or Rize in the database, doesn't mean one or both are actually executive board members.

    Speaking of which, most of the executive board members did get chips implanted in them in order to get good at chess. However, some like Pewler did not and were naturally talented. Raymond doesn't have one either as his skill is the real deal, and second only to the maestros.

    The bigger mystery is how Peter knew all that though. Perhaps it's as simple as him getting that information from Pewler, or perhaps there's more to it. Either way, the mystery will eventually be answered as the story goes on.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 12, 2024

    Author's Commentary #183:

    Time to talk about Chapter 183: The Japanese opening's grand debut.
    Once again, a new opening makes it's debut in the series, this time it's the Japanese opening, which stems from the Anderssen opening. There currently aren't any chess openings named after Japan or places in Japan, but I hope that changes especially with this opening.

    I've actually put some theory into it, both on the chess side, and on the story side, and in terms of chess viability, it's solid, especially if you play the main line. However, Utami deliberately didn't do that and played the next best move which has been dubbed, the Kyoto variation. The reason for this is because Okisato is seeking to use this opening to finally notch a win off of Peter and doesn't want him figuring out how he's going to play it.

    This idea was a spur of the moment type of deal, but I feel it was one of the best ideas yet I've had for the series as it will showcase a unique form of development. For now though, this is probably the last we'll see of the Japanese opening in this side story as Okisato's set to play as black if need be, and none of the others know the opening theory aside from Okisato and Utami.

    One other thing I'll mention is that everyone's ratings have increased due to both the events of Seasons 3 and 4, and for participating in a tournament off-screen. Peter was at that tournament which is why he was able to get to Tokyo so quickly. Speaking of Peter, it's been a while since he's last made an appearance. I actually planned to have him appear in Season 4, but had trouble figuring out how to factor him into to story, which led to him not making an appearance there. However, the game he was set to play has been salvaged, and trust me, it's going to be epic.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 12, 2024

    Author's Commentary #148:

    Time to talk about Chapter 148: Happy International chess day.
    So I recently got sick and as such, I was unable to write or do author commentaries until I get better. Since I'm doing these now, I'm obviously feeling much better. However, when I learned that July 20th was International chess day, I pushed myself to make this chapter even though I was sick.

    The game in particular ended up being a lifesaver. For you see, the game is actually the infamous 9-move mate game that was played between Fabiano Caruana and Alireza Firouzja in the Crunchlabs Masters 2024. In the game, Firouzja ended up falling for what many dub, "the 100 year old trick" which allowed Caruana to achieve a winning position as white. Firouzja resigned after realizing this.

    I decided to extend the game and show one of the possible ways to mate. Funnily enough, Firouzja ended up bouncing back from the loss and made it to the grand finals of the event. As for why the game is called "the 100 year old trick", that's due to the same rook sacrifice plan being used, albeit in a slightly different way, in a game between Carl Schlechter and Julius Perlis in 1911. Funnily enough, this also invokes some word of advice from the series itself as Mimoko made it a point that sometimes capturing a hanging rook could be bad.

    If I was feeling better, I probably would have featured a more extravagant game with the main cast, but I think that this was good considering the circumstances. As for the series, It will probably be on break for a bit longer, though I do plan to post something a special chapter on Mimoko's birthday, so look forward to that. Season 5 will likely be one of the shortest seasons, but that's honestly because Season 6 is shaping up to be something big. I thank everyone who's supported this series. There is more good things to come.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 12, 2024

    Author's Commentary #99:

    It's finally time to talk about the Season 3 finale, Chapter 99: What I always wanted.
    When I first began writing Season 2, I had no idea I'd split it into 2 parts, or that I'd eventually decide to just make the two parts their own separate seasons later on. However, I felt it was necessary since the chess boxing arc felt like it's own season. It's also hard to believe the series has 99 chapters, and would have had more up to this point if I decided not to merge some of the chapters.

    One thing I quickly want to mention about the chapter is the game Peter and Daria played. Ever since the Double Bongcloud was first played, I've always wondered what would happen if the players started playing seriously after it. I refrained from showing the game, mainly because I felt it would be too long and likely result in a draw due to how skilled Peter and Daria are.

    Speaking of games, Mimoko will now be playing far more casual games against Daria now that she's beaten her. Even though the Inoue family's been through a lot, things are starting to look brighter for them. And with that, Season 3 is complete.

    As for Season 4, I feel it's going to take some time and will be one of my more ambitious works writing wise. As such, I might take more time writing it in order to try and make it as good as possible. One thing I will confirm is that Season 4 will center around Iori.

    In the meantime, I've got something special planned to celebrate the 100th chapter. It's honestly kind of amazing that this series reached 100 chapters and will likely surpass Spice of life to become my largest series by both word and chapter count. It's also crazy that I've done author commentaries for all the chapters so far, especially since I've also done author commentaries for both the Spice of life remake and Escape Witch remake. Speaking of those series, I might end up doing a special crossover chapter with characters from those series.

    Before I end this, I'd like to thank everyone that's read and supported this series. It really means a lot to me and helps motivate me to write more.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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